This is really good, but I'm a little confused...what happened to Ratcliffe again? What's all this about Shakespeare and scandals and whatnot? Very good story, though!

OMG, I am so happy to see you have added another chapter to this saga. I love the madness, illusion, mystery, charm, and drama that you have done within this work. This chapter was great and I wait in anticipation for another.

Wow. This is quite the epic. The plot is fantastic, and I really love the title; its very captivating. I also love how detailed the chapters are and how they reveal so much. Each chapter kept me hanging and wanting more.

However, there are some spelling, grammatical, and punctuation errors; but proofreading can fix that. There is an excess of modern language, though. Try to tone down on that, as you're writing fiction set during a certain time period; the modern language becomes a bit of a distraction.

Otherwise, I love this and I hope you update soon!

This whole story is really intriguing, it's like falling down a historical rabbit hole and waking up and having to piece together all the madcap logic. Please continue, and add some P/JS action. This is by far the most creative take on the movie ever.

This is my review for the WHOLE thing:

WOW!

Please keep going with this! Add some Pocahontas/John Smith chapters!

I've just finished reading all 13 chapters that you've posted so far, and I'm entranced by this story!

I love how you thread different pieces of history into the story, exploring fully a range of themes, and the characterization is also wonderful.

I really hope you finish this one day!

It was good, but...o...my head hurts! I'm so confused! Who am I? Where am I? What's this?

It's a crime that you haven't finished this yet. I seriously hope you haven't given up writing.

I hope you find time to continue this story, its such a master work.

Great Story! What will happen next?

Just finished re-reading your story and it is even better than the first time I read it. You have a true gift for writing. I see you have 13 chapters so far and I can't wait for the update (what will happen in Jamestown? I hope you fininsh this story, for it is to great to be given up on. Again, great story.

I really like this so far! I can't wait to read the rest of it!

AGH! Who the hell is Dorian Gray? *on the edge of her seat* And they're going to Jamestown? Do tell! I can't wait to see what happens next! ^^ Great writing, as usual. More soon, please!

Thank you for the update. Your story is so wonderful and I hope you finish it.

Prepare thyself! The movies have invaded.

Well, welcome back to the fold, Tabby! I was starting to wonder if my sudden fanship hadn't spooked you into hiding (or a restraining order). I tend to get disturbing like that. But a chapter dedication! I am TOO flattered! I should hide myself from polite society - I'm not worthy in light of such honours!

*absolutely red face to match absolutely red hair*

SO here we go - May I mention again that Chap 9 was hilarious? I still think about certain quips sometimes and laugh.

In general, the setting of this story -seems- to bring together the styles of two of my favourite movies: Elizabeth I and The Madness of King George. Which is funny, cause this story is set right between both of them in continuity - heehee

Haha! Strangely enough, I think Geoffrey Rush just slipped in as James Fuller. Though more having to do with his role in "Shakespeare In Love". Ok, that was a set of random thoughts for the day. *bows and flies off like a gnat*

What is up with this Charles Fawkes character? He must be an author creation - I find this hilarious - I'm actually a BIG FAN of a real British politician who came onto the scene a hundred years later, by the name of Charles FOX. lol Though they appear to be nothing alike.

What a strange expedition. Hm - is this an actual review? I'm everywhere this time. And I think my review is coming off pretty crap - Sorry.

"But facts were facts - the man shoveled shit."

WELL PUT! lol I know how that is...

When I think of Count Wexford-Smyth, I think of Kenneth Branaugh. Told you about the movies-invading thing.

"I wouldn't even DREAM of bathing! This man is a lying monster!"

I know I've said this, but I'll say it again - I LOVE your humour! HAHA!

I'm glad we're on the ship! It's funny, and the plot is shoving along - However, the story is becoming more and more vague... and you're use of ellipses more and more constant. It could be frustrating for a reader whom isn't equally insane (as I am) as the material and the writer ;) Is your target audience insane people only? *waggles eyebrows* Ellipses! Crazy, man...

Ugh! Poor Raleigh. How screwed up.

I loved the chapter - Looking forward to the next 'intense one'! Keep at it. Tenaciously! Or I will tenaciously keep after you - RRar!