Great story! Update soon!

*sends over ice cream* Very good job. Hope to see more soon!

Already reviewed (LOVED IT! MORE!) just adding it to my favorites list.

Continue Please.

I'm speechless, I am really impressed. AWESOME! Could you please write more? Please?

Ok, finished the story. WOW! Is there more? Please? PLEASE?

Wow, I am completely amazed and speechless. It's so amazing so far, I don't think I ever saw anything completely like that before. (And I'm only on chapter 1, lol!) WOW!

Chocolate ice cream, please. Actually, very nice, very clear, sweet, keep up the good work! And give me ice cream. I need it to be crazy! GO AWAY, REX! Sorry, Rex is my imaginary dog, and he's reading over my shoulder LIKE ONE OF THOSE LITTLE WEINERS THEY SERVE IN SCHOOL! Anyhoo, great story. Write more!

Twisted! Rachel is the last one I would think to help Yeerks. At least Tobias gets a

second chance with Rachel.

:cries a little: poor Tobias...

CONTINUE IT! Please! Chocalate Icecream!

Very good ang orginal plot. I can't wait to read the sequal.

I like ice cream...can I have chocolate? Anyway, cool story, but you have to write more! Kay? Are we clear on that? ::smiles:: Good.

...Unusual, certainly! when i opened this, i was thinking along hte lines of a War Crimes panel, preparing to judge the Yeerks. hhmmm...

This is a great plot. I like it, good writing and ideas, although I'm not sure why it's PG13, other then the "S" word there's nothing bad in it. Anyway great story!