My God, you are wonderful! You know that? I could hardly keep my eyes off of it! And that ending, my god! Wonderful! I love it! :)

I can't believe you didn't get more reviews I loved this! So well written, a really great one shot!

lmao, i loved the part with Elphaba saying "horrors" while everyone just completly and utterly ignores her and continues to talk XD

You did a perfect job with Elphaba in "Book verse galore!" and i still absolutely love the irony

Awesome. I love little Elphaba XD

Oh gosh this is so good! I love the character of little Elphaba, and Melena. They are very well developed, and it's so interesting to read.

Wow, I don't really know what to say except that this was TOTALLY AWESOME! I really, really liked this piece and it made me laugh several times. Very good capture of the characters, hope to see more like this!

That was great! You did the toddler Elphaba so perfect, it's scary...

I loved it, favoriting!

Wow! That was incredible! Melena is so evil, and yet you still made me understand and sympathise with her just a little bit. And poor Elphie!

Wow indeed! I think you should continue this! :)