|Reviews for Broken Dawn|
| Edward-Jacob4ever01 1/5/11 . chapter 1
WOW WHAT HAPPEND NEXT! PLS I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT!
| Twilightobsessed09 9/21/10 . chapter 1
This was an excellent take on things..
But I am also here saying I am sorry for the disappointment you had to endure, but I am glad you are still writing and improving on your work and I am sure your friends are quite pleased.
As a reader and fan of your stories here on FF it has been a joy to find someone who has to ability to propel the characters into reality as well as you do. I always found myself enthralled by every chapter of my choice of story to read at that moment by you.
From previous messages, I have stated my joy if RL had made it possible for you to re-post some of your work but it seems extremely dim now to me and I am sad about that fact as I was looking forward to that.
But, I hope you'll return someday with other masterpieces to share with your appreciative readers such as myself..
Thank you for sharing..
| NUNICHAN 7/1/10 . chapter 1
This was a nice take on what could have happened. I always thought that after that kiss and seeing their future Bella would open her eyes. Glad to know she did in this fic. The ending was sort of undefined for me. Is she staying with Ed or moving on to Jake?
| JasperLuver48 6/12/10 . chapter 1
wow! i really enjoyed that missing moment :) good job!
| Kelsismom 6/4/10 . chapter 1
Hi! I chose this one shot because I wanted to quickly check out your writing style. Very nice and very in tune with the original story. Jacob and Edward are miles apart in maturity, and Edward really proves that he's the bigger man. Enjoyed it!
| BellaFlan 5/13/10 . chapter 1
So after our corresponding, I became curious about your contest entry. I loved it! It actually works perfectly with the original dialogue and you managed to keep them in character, despite the fact that Bella was doing something very much out of character. Also the lemon was so well done. I think fanfic might have messed-up some of your en dashes. Did the same thing to me.
You may like my J/B two-shot that was originally an SOB entry. It's on my profile, Swan Dive.
| ArtySmarty 5/4/10 . chapter 1
I know it's a Jacob/Bella story, and it was was really good, but I think it was really weird how well your chapter 23 went with Stephanie's chapter 24. Kind of weird how what Edward said has a whole new meaning too. He doesn't care that Bella gave his virginity to Jacob. Makes total sense. But you didn't write chapter twenty four. But like I already said, that was really good! :)
| TotallyObsessed82 4/29/10 . chapter 1
I really liked it. I dont' usually go for Jacob and Bella fics but I couldn't help myself. And damn Edward! Do you have to be so forgiving? I mean I know you're perfect and all but there comes a point! Lol
I really enjoyed it!
| Twilightsdance 4/29/10 . chapter 1
Great Job with this SHort!
(from twilightsdance in twitter)
| Tanja83 4/28/10 . chapter 1
wow. that is very good. very hot very yummy.
| LisaCAptainOfTeamJoseph 4/28/10 . chapter 1
Wow. Awesome take on the missing moment.
Although ... I could just kick Jake for running off right afterwards. I can see running off after a kiss ... but to "do it" for the first time, then STILL run off ... I was mad at him. LOL But it's still an awesome one shot 3 Great job, lady!