I love this book and i hope that u update again very soon.
Dragon

So, I was just lying here in bed, thinking to myself, "Dang. I could really go for some good Avatar fanfiction right about now..." Suddenly, I gasped and flailed for a moment because I remembered that you had updated, but I had been busy at the time, so I had completely forgotten about it until now. So then I came and read it, was really, really happy, and decided to tell you as much.

This made me really, really happy.

.:Hailey-Stone, yo:.

*grins wide* Hehehe, they got caught. Hehe...Muahahahaha! I love how the universe hates them! *settles down* Okay, I'm good...I think. On to my list of reasons.

1) Well, obviously, them getting caught red handed. Poor Tsu'tey, he's gonna get one heck a of a lecture. Hope Jake gets one too. :D

2) Jake's butt-whooping of Tsu'tey. Hehe, I love to see Jake beat the guy...and get beaten by him...I'm such a fickle person on this subject, ;)

All in all? A great new chapter. Hope to read more soon. Keep up the awesome writing.

Tamuril2

I have to say that I am surprised and overjoyed that you have continued writing this fic after three years have passed since its beginning. I have often feared that you would lose interest in updating it, as many authors do with long-term projects. Your writing is wonderful, and since it would take me days to individually describe all the reasons why, I'll stick with the first and foremost reason that it is, in my mind; characterization. Each and every interaction between characters, every single scene and thought process you include is essential and illuminating, and creates so much complexity and emotional depth it is simply breath taking. Thank you so much for writing this fic. It makes me glad, even on bad days, when everything feels like its gone to hell.

Lol! Tsu'tey as a chided little kid who's avoiding a scolding... That never gets old! XD I love this story! Keep up the good work!

Oh-ha. Caught red handed. Great to see that you updated! I am really looking forward to their 'contest'. :)

It's always amusing that no matter how tough a guy is his mother makes him feel like a kid again.

I am very happy to have found this.

I liked this.

Oh, sooo glad to see another chapter. Great line from Jake: "oh, hell." and " The universe hates me." LOL So, once again, these two get into trouble (snicker). I'm sure Tsu'tey'll make sure he thanks Jake for leaving him alone with his mother.

Somebody's in trouble...somebody's in trouble...but aren't they always? Thanks for updating!

Fun, though I can't wait until they fight for real. Please update soon!

LOL! XD
Great chapter! I love the interaction between Jake and Tsu'tey.

What happens next?

I'm curious on how this challenge for leadership will play out. Both are highly trained fighters.

Short, and mostly filler. But it's nice to see this updated!