Wow. I LOVE this. *starts bawling*

...alright, I'm done. *sniffle* But really. BEAUTIFUL, indeed!

You're definitely not J.K. Rowling alright. Your writing is a lot more sensual. I lost counts of how much time I've been spending reading and re-reading this little piece, but damn it never fail to move me. It's beautiful. Now it's just need to be edited in order to be perfect.

Thats so sad my anti depressants might have stopped working, which is really lame but y'know.

I think "FRUYGHJUIEDFBFDCVNBVGRFHJD!1!" Sums up its awesomeness

It's really sad but beautifully done. Does need a beta though, not too many errors, but enough to be noticable.