 bina W 12/6/11 . chapter 8Absolutely wonderful. I read the prequel as well. How about writing a sequel to this story?
Bina |
 StarTrekFanWriter 9/13/11 . chapter 7alls well that ends well. |
 StarTrekFanWriter 9/13/11 . chapter 2Hmmmm...this is following a suprisingly similar plot bunny I had in mind for the little lost romulan found in "Tapestry". |
 StarTrekFanWriter 9/13/11 . chapter 1I'm intrigued! Can't read it now though...will in a little bit. |
 Sakura Aloni 11/14/10 . chapter 8Wow, the perfect balance of cute, serious, and many other wonderful aspects, great follow up. |
 Igiveup 6/17/10 . chapter 8Beautiful ending to a beautiful story.
And for the last time, "AW!" D |
 Igiveup 6/17/10 . chapter 7All right! Glad they can finally put their past behind them and be happy. Very sweet gesture on Spock's part. :) |
 Igiveup 6/17/10 . chapter 6And once again, "AW!"
These reviews of mine are starting to get a bit boring, aren't they? :) |
 Igiveup 6/17/10 . chapter 5More aw! I've been saying that a lot in these chapters.
Minor typo: "She olf enough to speak for herself," and "on their last visit to Earth" the "On" should be capitalised.
Minor, minor detail, otherwise perfect! |
 Igiveup 6/17/10 . chapter 4Kids are still beyond cute, without getting to the point of being annoying.(Not an easy task.) Very well done! Every scene with them has me constantly going "Aw!" Okay, maybe more like, "AW!" LOL.
Uhura and Spock's actually a pretty good pairing in both universes. Both Uhuras certainly have more self respect than TOS' Nurse Chapel. |
 Igiveup 6/17/10 . chapter 2Aw! That was so sweet of them. Those kids are so cute. _
As far as sympathy for T'Pring goes, only in the 2009 movie's universe could I ever feel sorry for her. In TOS... not so much. Pity it takes such extreme circumstances and innocent people having to die/suffer first.
From reading Rejected and Despised, I think I read the Passive Agressive Release chapter before when you posted it on Rosemary's blog. It certainly looks very familiar. |
 Lula1 6/11/10 . chapter 4The strangest thing happened. I tried to review chap 3 and it kept coming up with yahoo messaging when I clicked on the review bar. Sooo...
I really felt bad for Spock in 3. It is so sad to think that he would be turned away by his people because of his duality. So xenophobic, if you ask me. Just because he is half human, doesn't make him inferior. Mercy, I despise racists.
It was absolutely beautiful how the children look to him with love and affection. That was horrible... about Scutah. How could anyone throw away a child because of broken legs, arm, or any other affliction? My eyes were watering up when I read what Saavik said.
You have such a wonderful way of portraying emotions of the 'supposed' emotionless. We all know they have emotions... much more powerful than humans, but such a tight control over them. But to see them reveal themselves, is just... wow.
I'm still trying to figure out how I overlooked this wonderful story!
LuWanda |
 Lula1 6/11/10 . chapter 2So sad. I feel for Spock and it was beautiful how all the little ones tried to comfort their Sa-Sa. Absolutely beautiful.
LuWanda |
 Lula1 6/11/10 . chapter 1This is so unlike T'Pring. I know it was a catastrophic event and subsequent discoveries that have brought her to her knees, but I still do not trust her.
Vulcan males trying to mate with her 'even' before she healed from childbirth? LOL... rutting animals, lol. It seems that the 'natural' male instinct to hump is not exclusive to humans. It sounds like it may be even worse with Vulcans. Typical males... a disaster of epic proportions and they are thinking of sex, errr... procreation, I should say.
How did this story slip by me? Hmmm, better keep on my toes.
LuWanda |
 Babita 5/1/10 . chapter 8OMG! This little treat was wonderful! Such a unique take of Spock and T'Pring. I loved it! |