This is incredible and believable and I love the connection to their childhood and the vulnerability and sense of family of the whole thing. So well done :)

Wow...

This was awesome. Made me think of my own dad, my hero, my rock. The kinda guy who will always sit on the porch and watch the storm, no matter how frightening it may be.

Loved it.

Wow.

That... that was beautiful. From the urgency to the characters to the discriptions to the emotions... this was a haunting masterpiece. Very well done.

That's cute

Hurt Dean is just my thing LOL I don't know how, I love it... And angst too )

Good one!

Kisses

Rosetta

Really nice story! And very well written. Had to smile at the kids running for Sam instead of Dean and good to see people helping the boys for a change. Any chance for an epilogue?

This is a deceptive story - it's simply and beautifully told, straightforward, but there are layers and layers of meaning hiding in here, making this rich and expressive. I had to read it twice, then think about it, then read it a third time before I could begin to review. It's stunning. Thanks for posting it here.

Phoebe

Amazing story, the writing is so descriptive and moving, just brilliant!

oh man talk about heart-lurching! i coulda sworn i was gonna break out into tears almost at some parts! great story. i love how you got into their roots. and the part with dean and john was so precious!

Fantastic one-shot. Felt like it was lifted right out of an episode and the depth you put into imagery and introspection, amazing. It feels like an age since I've read anything from you. I hope this has inspired a boat load more. Thank you for sharing. And as usual you were able to put the emphasis on just how the brothers care for each other but how much they sacrifice to get the job done, putting the safety of others first. It was nice to see them get acknowledgment. Rarely happens. And for others to look out for them for once. :)

I liked it. Wrote you a poem which I am sending to your LJ.

such a cute, creative, suspenseful story

How ironic. Sam wouldn't let Dean carry the tazer so he wouldn't get electrocuted and Dean was still the one that got hurt. I love it. I loved the flashbacks, too. Great job.

Great story! Well written. Powerful. Wish there was more!

Thanks for writing - you do it well!