|Reviews for Red Devil|
| gitgit 6/14/11 . chapter 3
they are going to have one hell of a meeting! or should i say boot camp!
| gitgit 6/14/11 . chapter 2
i freakin love this chapter
cant wait to see what you have planned for next!
| gitgit 6/14/11 . chapter 1
which twisted cunt are we talking about?
that was definitely an interesting chapter though! !
| belledejour84 5/29/11 . chapter 15
Manchester United and Twi-Fic - two of my favourite things together!
Please update soon.
| allthatsparkles 5/11/11 . chapter 1
Okay, got to find out why Edward is playing in a game while Bella is off somewhere possibly dead.
| Tyalieva 4/22/11 . chapter 15
Ouch Ouch Ouch!
Is there hope to read an update someday? I can see it's been 2 months sinces the last one. :-(
I kind of started (well, lets admit it, not really started but...) to like those lemons a lot!
Hope to read more soon!
| Mireads 4/15/11 . chapter 15
This is reallyba great story
| miss.eve 3/15/11 . chapter 15
i love this story!
sorry for skipping and do not leaving any comments earlier but this NEXT button was too tempting! Once i start to read i cannot help myself and read it all!
I really like Bella in this story (i know she is little messed up-black's,mummy's and daddy's issues etc.) In fact she is a badass! Little insecure when it's comes to feelings but he manage her job like a pro! She is smart,witty and do not takes any bullshit!
Edward... let's just said that i cant write much without taking the shower - the cold one!
And last but not leat THE penis of course! The real main character in this story! Damned if he doesn't deserve some kind of Penis Award! I love edward's mental exchanges with him! I am contantly grinning like a moron in front of my computer screen!
waiting for the new chapter! great great story!
| Daphnetjuh 3/9/11 . chapter 15
Noooooo! why. why leave us hanging at this point? and why did I again manage to find a story to read that needs new upates after a cliffy? I'm doomed..
Anyways I love your story. Keep up the good work! the both of you!
| Angeldolphin01 3/5/11 . chapter 15
I just finished reading the story as it stands and I love it. I can't wait to read what happens next.
| luckystar113 3/5/11 . chapter 15
Ah come on! You guys are so evil!
On one hand, I understand why Edward is so upset but at the same time, where is the trust? I said it before, he needs to open up and trust her. They're clearly dancing around the issues at hand and having to keep everything secret isn't helping.
It was obvious that things were going to blow up at some point. And now I have to wait for it! Teases :)
I think it was good for Bella to have someone who knows her come out to see her. Especially to tell her everything she knows but won't admit.
Edward needs to get over himself. I'm glad that they're finally going to get to talk things out but at the same time, I'm worried. I know how his temper will get the best of him and it scares me that he will just walk away without the benefit of the doubt. But he wouldn't do that to his dick would he?
Bella is one lucky girl btw. And I am not jealous at all. Nope.
| luckystar113 3/5/11 . chapter 14
Unf unf unf.
Nothing like a good fuck up against the wall. Even if it was spurred on by gay porn. Not that I am complaining about that at all. I found it highly amusing that Edward was listening at the door. Snoop.
I really love that Edward's dick has a mind and personality of his own. He should have his own spin off. Or at least an outtake. I would enjoy that very much. I bet his dick would too :)
I'm glad they had a chance to talk. Slowly but surely they're getting closer and closer. I understand it's hard to open up to someone but things are never going to work if he isn't honest with her and doesn't let her in. I'm a little worried for her suggesting for him to go back to therapy, but I know that it's necessary.
The phone sex? UNFFFFFFFFF
| luckystar113 3/5/11 . chapter 13
oh god I've missed him!
Okay, seriously want to junk punch his dad. Blah blah ruin the family name blah blah family business. STFU. If he's so tired of having to 'clean up' Edward's mess then just freaking right him off already. Hasn't he figured out by now that he's not going to follow in the family name. I mean, jeebus.
Have I mentioned that I love when his penis talks? His penis can talk to me anytime he wants... just saying.
How much do I love that Bella was watching gay porn? Holy hell that is amazing. And the fact that she got caught is even better. Bahahahah
Victoria needed to be bitch slapped but I'm glad that Bella held her professional demeanor. Good for her. However, I think she should be allowed a freebie. Dumb whore.
Gah, so glad you guys are back! :)
| ajs99 2/26/11 . chapter 8
so gpppd xxx
| ajs99 2/26/11 . chapter 5
LOVING IT XX