This story is an excellent representation of the life of an Imperial Tie fighter pilot, although they are quite a rare sight.
I do believe all of your effort and hard work has payed off elaborately, Well done, Lieutenant Commander.
I do hope that in the not too distant future I will be hearing from you more.
Do not underestimate the power of the dark side.

I'll beta, if you'd like.
Lovely story. It's the first Piett romance I've seen here. Please continue.

Megbo, First off, this is actually a review for chapters 2-5. That said, I am really enjoying this story. You are doing something few people on this site do: You are balancing plot and character development. What a concept!!! Anywhoo, Great Job and Keep Writing.

This stroy is great. You can't stop here. That's inhumane! MORE!

Interesting idea, nicely handled... looking forward to seeing more of this story.

This story is well researched!!! Kudos to you for paying attention to details! (Details are what make or break fan fiction of such a beloved theme.)
But other than details, the depth of character is really great. Abiona is strong and weak and confident and unsure all at the same time. I love her.---Just between you and me, Megbo, I see a lot of you in her!

Thanks Jaina, I appreciate the feedback :)

I'm thinking that it might be a couple weeks or so before I get a third chapter even written, let alone ready to post. Our high school musical has tech rehearsals this week and opens next weekend. After that, I should be back to weekly or so! :-D

I really liked this Chapter. I am fascinated by the concept of a female fighter pilot. I also find it a little bit amusing that the only ship in the fleet that accepts female pilots as pilots is Vader's ship the Executor. Although Vader does have a reputation for promoting talent. Please keep writing.

I don't know what most of this means, because I don't read a lot of Star Wars stuff. I mean, I watch the movies and enjoy them, and that's about it. I can't wait to find out what the admiral wants to speak with her about. Keep writing!

Nice beginning to this story. I really liked reading the first chapter. I hope you plan to continue it because you have established a solid foundation for this story. I can't wait to find out what ship she is stationed on.