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Kentastic72 3/4/12 . chapter 22
Awww, this was sweet! I love it!

Even if Mizuki doesn't get as much love as he needs. XD
GreyInnocence 4/20/11 . chapter 22
Hahahaha. Marui most easily satisfied person ever. xD
Kyokugami 4/3/11 . chapter 21
I loved all of them! (but, as a Golden Pair geek, I love theirs the most).

Lol, only one more left? D:
Midori-Emmi 3/6/11 . chapter 21
Hi:) I love all the drabbles, they are so awesome! Some are rather short though...but I guess it can't really be helped:P Um...I also don't really get the 'Yukimura is the same age as Akaya' part...uh...care to explain?
rebirthreborn 3/6/11 . chapter 21
Haha! Poor Marui, Niou & Akaya xD But I supposed Yukimura had a best gift xDD
demoncat13 3/5/11 . chapter 21
poor boys.
Faoiltierna 3/3/11 . chapter 17
Hey, Niou could have insisted on a costume party and come as Akaya...that would have been fun! ;-)
Faoiltierna 3/3/11 . chapter 10
Oh...the idea of Yukimura and Kirihara being the same age IS rather frightening!
Faoiltierna 3/3/11 . chapter 5
Aw! I feel sorry for Mizuki! Sure he can be manipulative and conniving, but no one deserves to be unloved on their birthday!
Xx The Grey Lady xX 3/2/11 . chapter 20
Fujiiiii. You would. I love him so much. 3
Minnesota Fireball Wolf 2/15/11 . chapter 19
Awwww! So cute! I dislike Valentines Day but this chapter made me smile!
rebirthreborn 2/15/11 . chapter 19
Shishido is so cute xD Silver Pair FTW
1sunfun 2/15/11 . chapter 19
Nice.

CCAP
speadee 1/26/11 . chapter 18
What do you mean by super fail? I didn't see you fail anything.

I like how you used the birthdays and tennis to show dominance for Oshitari and Mukahi. I agree with Oshitari in finding it strange that Mukahi is older, because Mukahi looks younger. We see this kind of thing in in real life, too, and I like how you brought it in. It does sound like Mukahi to think he's better because he's a month older.

I liked how you were able to use only a few sentences to show that the teams were like family with Kawamura's birthday. It would be nice if we have more people like that in real life.

I laughed when I read this: "super best best friends that kissed and stuff without any actual label on it." That was a funny and creative way to say it. You described well that the best birthday presents don't have to be wrapped or concrete. I'm glad Kikumaru's family accepted the relationship.

I thought Niou would be the type to like parties and celebrations. Then again, since he's "the trickster," he could have been pretending to not do anything. That's a funny way to put it. A birthday party designed for kids is also a good present: a trick for the trickster.

You used Echizen's birthday to show his relationship with Momoshiro well. Not letting Christmas overshadow his birthday is a good present.
Bobbie3926 12/26/10 . chapter 18
I love that story. I wish my friend were like that on my birthday.
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