 Kentastic72 3/4/12 . chapter 22Awww, this was sweet! I love it!
Even if Mizuki doesn't get as much love as he needs. XD |
 GreyInnocence 4/20/11 . chapter 22Hahahaha. Marui most easily satisfied person ever. xD |
 Kyokugami 4/3/11 . chapter 21I loved all of them! (but, as a Golden Pair geek, I love theirs the most).
Lol, only one more left? D: |
 Midori-Emmi 3/6/11 . chapter 21Hi:) I love all the drabbles, they are so awesome! Some are rather short though...but I guess it can't really be helped:P Um...I also don't really get the 'Yukimura is the same age as Akaya' part...uh...care to explain? |
 rebirthreborn 3/6/11 . chapter 21Haha! Poor Marui, Niou & Akaya xD But I supposed Yukimura had a best gift xDD |
 demoncat13 3/5/11 . chapter 21poor boys. |
 Faoiltierna 3/3/11 . chapter 17Hey, Niou could have insisted on a costume party and come as Akaya...that would have been fun! ;-) |
 Faoiltierna 3/3/11 . chapter 10Oh...the idea of Yukimura and Kirihara being the same age IS rather frightening! |
 Faoiltierna 3/3/11 . chapter 5Aw! I feel sorry for Mizuki! Sure he can be manipulative and conniving, but no one deserves to be unloved on their birthday! |
 Xx The Grey Lady xX 3/2/11 . chapter 20Fujiiiii. You would. I love him so much. 3 |
 Minnesota Fireball Wolf 2/15/11 . chapter 19Awwww! So cute! I dislike Valentines Day but this chapter made me smile! |
 rebirthreborn 2/15/11 . chapter 19Shishido is so cute xD Silver Pair FTW |
 1sunfun 2/15/11 . chapter 19Nice.
CCAP |
 speadee 1/26/11 . chapter 18What do you mean by super fail? I didn't see you fail anything.
I like how you used the birthdays and tennis to show dominance for Oshitari and Mukahi. I agree with Oshitari in finding it strange that Mukahi is older, because Mukahi looks younger. We see this kind of thing in in real life, too, and I like how you brought it in. It does sound like Mukahi to think he's better because he's a month older.
I liked how you were able to use only a few sentences to show that the teams were like family with Kawamura's birthday. It would be nice if we have more people like that in real life.
I laughed when I read this: "super best best friends that kissed and stuff without any actual label on it." That was a funny and creative way to say it. You described well that the best birthday presents don't have to be wrapped or concrete. I'm glad Kikumaru's family accepted the relationship.
I thought Niou would be the type to like parties and celebrations. Then again, since he's "the trickster," he could have been pretending to not do anything. That's a funny way to put it. A birthday party designed for kids is also a good present: a trick for the trickster.
You used Echizen's birthday to show his relationship with Momoshiro well. Not letting Christmas overshadow his birthday is a good present. |
 Bobbie3926 12/26/10 . chapter 18I love that story. I wish my friend were like that on my birthday. |