   FionanMichael 11/13/11 . chapter 1Omg tht was hilarious. When they always ask Fi if she's Michael's wife she never turns tht down!:-) epic |
| writergirl99 8/27/10 . chapter 1 I totally love this, can so see it happening... Loved it. Maybe you could think about another chapter? you could possibly add another one... But this was amazing, keep up the great work! |
| sirscreen 6/5/10 . chapter 1 Pretty please with sugar on top, update? |
| normal-on-strike3zq 5/30/10 . chapter 1 Nice one. Very funny. I can just piture fi doing that...
-Ember:) |
| Tempe4Booth 5/2/10 . chapter 1 LMAO |
| Goldenleaf1510 5/1/10 . chapter 1 Just love it! Honestly wish they would write this scene into the show, to see JD and GA perform it! |
| NCISaddict77 4/30/10 . chapter 1 cute story |
| Reine Moonset 4/30/10 . chapter 1 Ohh, Michael. You have received your high-school comeuppance.
I liked the different descriptions of their reactions. I could imagine each motion, gesture, and expression that you wrote for Mike and Fi.
Very funny! Keep writing!
-Vendetta |
| ChaoxxYori 4/30/10 . chapter 1 Oh, Michael, Fiona's never going to forget this! (: |
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