i really liked this story. might you be able to write more Proctor/Selena? also the pieces you posted at the top of your page got me to think. i'm going to try to send them to my friends and see if they will pass them on.

that AS A REALLY GOOD STORY YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE LOL

Really sweet story! I love the way Procter looks at Selena as mentor and father figure. There aren't enough Miami Medical stories out there

Good story. I like Serena and Proctor's interaction and he would make a good mentor for her.