You have a great attention to detail. I really liked it a lot!

_ yeah it was good. i really liked how you kept ending the chaps with the same line.

and that of course amy is out of the picture. never liked her-she was way too selfish.

bravo! Very nice work. I particularly like the pacing and the use of repetition. Hmm, almost as if you had some background in public speaking and the art of monologue... *laughs*

One minor quibble, and a question. If Josh has 2 minutes and 30 seconds to make his meeting, the watch would not say 58 after the hour, it would say 57 and thirty seconds. Yes, yes, I know, but it caught my eye and distracted me from the whole next paragraph.

My question: how come we didn't get more description of Donna in her new outfit? Don't you love us any more? Gee whiz...

Wow. All I can say is wow. I loved this story since I love ones about getting Josh and Donna together ( :) ), but I also loved how you so perfectly matched the tone of the actual show. You hit Josh's sarcasm and everything as if you're an actual writer for the show or something. I haven't checked yet, but I hope you have written more West Wing fics. :)

I loved this piece, I really can see Josh sending Donna roses and then spending the day wondering about it. such a fun way for him to confess his feelings. I also liked the bit about the coffee

Oooh! Very, very well done!

*smile* Go Josh.

Well, go Donna, for that matter.

I am speechless. Truly speechless. Actually, I can think of one thing to say: wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.

That was great, chica. :)

Awwwww... that was wonderful. Especially love the "monumentally stupid and monumentally intelligent" line. Perfect. Four stars for sweetness, humor and for being the quintessential j/d valentine's day story :)

ahh! great story! i loved it. heehee, i really liked the ending. keep up the excellent writing! :D

Lovely. Very sweet.

That was so fantastic - I loved it! I particularly loved the repetition of phrase in each chapter - so well-done! Please keep writing!

Aw... cuteness!

You can't keep us in evil suspense like this! More!

no! you can't stop it there! i'm going crazy with curiosity! i really want to know who sent them, and what happens between josh/amy, or josh/donna. keep up the excellent writing! :D