Best battle scene ever nuf said if you ever right more Pokemon fiction and need a beta pm and I'll help

A very amazing story! I am so grateful someone made a story like this! Amazing job on detail! Love this! Thank you! :) :) :) :)

I really enjoyed this fanfic. Looking forward to reading anything else you write in the future.

So youre making them part ways and Chase their dream. Sad. Makes it feel all nostalgic and everything. Ehh ill read the last chaoter. Hope its not sad

If I was there and had a Gengar is order him to shoot shadow balls at the audience. They are assholes! Damn I love your pic. You did a great job on it.

Lol well you finish two years later. Good job and here's review 200!

Dammit sabrina. I always wondered how the other trainers got past her. Oh and nice with brendens back story and I don't think may is a bitch in this story anymore after the other chaoter. Damnit I should've known it was landing lol. Can't wait for the surprise.

Great humor once again but leaf didn't get mad or did she lol. Nice o love how you put jimmy marinated and Jackson in this. Wonder who leaked

Hmm... Maybe, without my opinions, the story hadn't been like that... Maybe it'd been even better, if I hadn't interfered all the time? O_o

Hehe... Brendan didn't even beat Latios, who Pikachu tied with It's nice to see that Ash was better than him, when he was ten, than he is now :D

Brock got a girl! :') Oh, if only every episode in the anime ended like it did with Brock... I liked your choice of Wilhelmina, I think they're rather good together

A little disappointed that all Gary's cheerleaders ceased to exist... But that's the anime's fault, not yours :P Oh, well! He'll always be Gary Motherf*cking Oak!

YES! Epic, finishing, inner dialog! :D Every story needs one

So THAT'S what was up with the lemonade? Interesting... Even thought I prefer much simpler humor

Hey... Can you blame me? Who doesn't like the attention? ;) Although, I AM certain that you'd been able to pull it off on your own!

Don't worry! I won't reveal anything, let's say I've already forgotten-... Wait... I HAVE forgotten it! D:

It's rather hard to write a review, when you're messaging each other so much... But I think I'll pull it off

Hmm... Is this the feeling an 'uncle' get, when his 'nephew' graduates? I'm feeling a little sad, actually :'( But... at the same time, it's a good way of "sad"... How that now makes sense

So this is the end, huh? It's actually been fun, even if it STILL does feel like I didn't make much difference :P You're a very good author! Heck, I wished that my first story had been this good... You can only improve your writing now, there's only a few last tips I'd like to share with you:

1. Listen to the readers' opinions, always. Sometimes, even the most crazy idea can turn out good!

2. Express yourself! Imagine the character doing all those things, then write it! You can, if you want! That kinda annoys me, that you sometimes forgets to do that, while you know how to do it. It's not a lot of people that manage to pull that off, so you better start doing it for them too! ;)

3. Lastly... NO RESTRICTIONS! You are not writing some kind of paper for an exam... You are writing Fanfiction! You are ALLOWED to go overboard, to sometimes make absolutely no sense! There's no need for everything to be so realistic and strict! I know you can do it... So do it! :)

Exactly 150,000 words? It seems as though your obsession with even numbers follows you all the way the the word-count of your story ;) It's actually rather nice pulled off *glances on my uneven numbers with great jealousy*, but don't let it affect the story's quality!

Well... There's not much more to say, is there? Except... You're welcome! and... Natsu is the perfect character for finishing blows! ;P

I hope you're going to manage to make another story of the same standard (or even better!) as your next one! Even though I won't be there to pester you of unnecessary things

You did a nice work here, mate. A very nice one. If more people wrote like this, I'd start reading Fanfics regularly again :)

I thank you, on behalf of most of your readers, that you wrote this story for us.

/Gerbilftw

Well that was cute lol. Little flashbacks. And I wanna see leaf angry lol

Leaf made me laugh though. You wouldn't know anything if it wasn't for ash so th out of character was fine. And Ehh she does bug me in this fic though to be honest and she's usually one of my favorites. Great job with leaf.

That's wassup nice ending. Either you read a lot of romance ,watched a lot of movies or got this straight from experience. Lol Brock doesn't know about Steven that sucks. Finally though they're together.

Wow. The last chapter at long last. I feel sorry for finding this story so late after it started.

I liked how you showed where all the characters are now. I didn't expect Gary and Dawn to be together so soon but It's nice.

So Brendan once fought Tobias and his pokemon damaged the tower? Cool. I get what Brendan meant by a 'weird' dude and his Latios.

I love the Tonight Show! Lemonade lol.

And Ash will meet Leaf again. Yay!

You have written one excellent story and I thank you very much. You are a really good writer. Hope you keep writing.

is there going to be a sequel

So this is it, I mean this is where it finally ends. I don't know I have lots of mixed feelings inside about it. There's happiness thinking about how everything turned out so well, I mean this story deserves a proper ending more than anything. I mean if it was abandoned just as I thought it was two month ago it would be real disappointment to us the readers. There's also sadness thinking it will never be updated again. There was hope that it may have a sequel but you didn't mention anything about it in epilogue. So It's safe to imagine it's not the case. So the start of 2012 should be great but it's not because of it. I liked Ash and Leaf as a pair. They loved each other and yet stayed competitive in battle. I liked them and want to read more about this pairing from you. If that happens then It will be a very happy new year to me. But anyways I wish you a very happy new year.