omg, you had me sobbing with the first paragraph! i've been putting this off, not wanting to say goodbye. i know, i'm such a sap! :D but it was absolutely perfect! my heart skipped a beat and i had tears in my eyes when they named their son mick. and sarah just sounds like the most beautiful little angel. then coming full circle with seth and parker getting married, god i can't stop grinning at that. yeah, i must look like a loon right about now! :D

thank you so much for such an awesome story. this is truly one of my all-time favorites and i will be re-visiting often! i'm sure there are little parts of the mystery i'll catch the second time around. now i can't wait to get started on the next story. i started with the one shots then the full stories. and thank you so much for all of your wonderful replies. i'm so glad it has brought back wonderful memories for you!

jodie xox

oh my god, i'm sobbing! christ on a cracker woman, you've scrambled my brains! when michaels first referred to jasper as son i wondered but kept thinking that's impossible, his father's dead. but then michaels's frantic tone when jasper was on the ledge, along with jasper's childhood memories, confirmed that it was someone who love jasper dearly. god, my heart hurt when he told jasper why he left and that he never stopped watching over them. it's awesome that he was there for their graduations and for the wedding. so that's who was in the limo with aro. and now jasper's father really is gone and my heart hurts again, for all of them! and from now on, when edward has a crazy ass dream, i hope to god jasper stays put!

i love that jasper has decided to become a teacher. he was so fantastic with seth and all the other kids, it'll be the perfect job for him. and i sure hope we get to see some cullen-whitlock children running around at some point. these boys will be the most awesome fathers!

i'm so sad, i can't believe it's the end, one more chapter and i'm done. i just don't want to say goodbye. xox

holy. shit! my heart just stopped. i'm not sure what to think. is someone else there with them or has jasper just gotten caught by the water in the cave? and thank god edward went looking for him. and who exactly is michaels and why is something familiar about him to jasper?

and wow, paradise island is simply gorgeous and the perfect place for them to consummate their marriage, over and over and over... :) i'm so jealous!

btw, i forgot all about what jenks had said last chapter. who will never stop watching the boys? again, is it aro? aro seems the obvious choice so i'm sure it's not him. god, i'm racking my brain. and the tickets, hmmm, someone who hasn't gotten much say in the story. could it eric or jane? gah, i so love trying to figure this out! xox

wow, edward's dream was rather ominous! i hope to god it's not a premonition. it had to be aro who sent the tickets, right? why else would he stop by their wedding? would he really try to hurt either of them? i'm dying to know who was in the limo with him too. hmmm, the mystery continues...

also, their wedding was beautiful and perfectly them. i love that seth stood up for jasper. wow, what a long way he's come, from the boy who wouldn't talk to now being the best man. edward and jasper have to be so incredibly proud of the influence they've had on seth's life. and god, i had tears in my eyes during the convo between bella and edward. they'll both always feel that loss of their baby and i could totally understand bella being so worried about this baby too. that little boy's life will be overflowing with love. :) xox

wow, cauis definitely slipped off the deep end. good lord, could you imagine if that gun had gone off? yikes! but my god that house, or castle, sounds amazing. i was worried that sam and riley were going to walk into a blood bath. aro's quite lucky and it sounds like he'll get quite a deal out of telling sam and riley everything he knows.

but jenks, my god that man is ruthless and i'm actually sorry that sam or riley didn't kill him. he's rather crafty and i hope to god he doesn't beat the system somehow. it was sickening hearing his murder/suicide plan, thank god they all knew what to expect.

but god, jasper mouthing yes to edward at the moment he did was brilliant! and he was hilarious in the hospital when edward wouldn't stop yelling. they were making my heart all squeezy, having their beds pushed together just so they could hold hands. loved it! xox

i love these boys and i can only imagine how terrifying all of this is for them. not only the chance of losing their lives but their future together. jasper being overwhelmed makes perfect sense and i think that edward's proposal was beautiful. i love when things like that are done in a moment when it comes from somewhere so deep in your heart. they're in an unsettled situation and edward doesn't want to lose the one person who means the world to him. same for jasper and i can see why he doesn't want this moment marred by their current situation. when it's all over it'll be perfect.

now, what is jenks up to? why does he want jasper to be there when he meets with edward? they really need to talk to sam and maybe wear bullet proof vests! thank god they've figured out who jenks is. shit, i never would have figured he was riley's father's partner. nope, i didn't see that one coming. :)

and now caius has got aro. can't imagine how that's going to end. caius is extremely distraught, no telling what he might do. i'm wonder if he knew that lauren was aro's son? wow, what a mess. it's about time someone takes jenks down for all the grief he's caused! xox

I enjoyed this story. It was a great mix of lemons and actual story with mystery and everything else fascinating! I was wondering how they had their children.

I've been reading this and I finally have to review to ask what they were thinking accepting a gift like that without knowing who gave it to them? After everything they've been through? Did they tell Sam or Riley about it I wonder? They should be a little more paranoid, especially since Jenks is still alive. So what he's in jail. I'll read on to find out what happens next...

omg, aro! i didn't think he wanted edward arrested but why? does he just want someone to pay for embezzling from him, even if they're innocent or is this personal against jasper? did aro hire jasper to ruin him? i'm sure aro wouldn't have known that edward and jasper would fall in love but it was probably just a bonus for aro that they did. hmmm...

thank god edward saw that photo, now they can finally piece everything together. it's crazy that riley's father was killed also. i'll stake my life on those bullets matching up.

i think i'm going to have to dig out my thesaurus, i'm pretty sure i've started every one of my reviews with wow, omg, or holy shit! yep, each chapter has blown me away and actually leaves me a bit speechless, believe it or not! :D xox

so far so good

omg! how and why? since everything pointed to edward i shouldn't be surprised that someone was still going to try to pin this on him but i figured sam wouldn't let it happen. who's behind this? it's got to be jenks, right?

this chapter was so light and relaxing, well up til the end. :) it was nice to see jasper and edward relaxed and enjoying their lives. and jeez, seth is exhausting! but he's a good kid who found a great home. i do hope he finds a love like jasper and edward's.

i do have to tell you that i seriously considered calling in sick at work just so i could finish reading! i was so caught up that i didn't want to stop reading yesterday! i want them to get to the bottom of this mess but i don't want the story to be over. this is one where i'll definitely be heading back to chapter one and re-reading! xox

wow, just wow! i figured mike was going to bite the dust once jasper blocked the duplicate accounts and i figured that lauren was a man but i never figured he was aro's son! it makes sense that aro is arthur and i assumed jenks was james but omg, i never expected him to be behind all of this! so did james get screwed over by arthur and now he's getting back at him? and how did he have access to OWF? through lauren? it was quite brilliant of lauren to leave the clues. can't wait til jasper figures out where he knows jenks from. it's rather ironic that aro disowned his son while he was involved with caius.

have i told you how much i freaking love this story? probably quite a few times, huh? :D

jodie xox

loved the make up sex snd the fake fight. and i'm all for fake make up sex too! they might as well reap the benefits, kwim? :D the boys know exactly how to play mike. i was just worried he would make a move without them knowing, blowing the whole plan. i wonder if lauren suspects that jasper and edward's fight wasn't real or if she's just really pissed that mike's heading out when they have some embezzling to do. xox

wow, i knew lauren was involved but i never thought she pulled the trigger on ben. she's one crazy bitch! and mike! i can't believe he had the balls to rig edward's computer and that he seems to think he would have a chance with jasper. yeah, the boy's delusional. i can't wait til jasper finds out it was mike who did that to edward. god, he's gonna kill mike!

i wonder where jasper knows jenks from. i thought he might come across something in his father's journals that would jog his memory. i love that rose, emmett and alice showed up. with all of them working on this they're bound to uncover plenty about jasper's father's case. i'm happy that everything's cool with jasper and alice. i think they should let rose lose on whomever is behind all of this. once she finds out this person threatened jasper, she'll tear them apart limb for limb! :D

best of all, the boys are back together, yay! edward just needed time and i knew that once he found out jasper had gotten hurt that nothing else would matter! xox

i am sobbing my eyes out! my heart just broke at edward's reaction and him calling a cab for jasper killed me. his reaction is totally reasonable though, he needed to be able to think things through and realize jasper is doing a job and not blaming or using edward. i love that jasper told carlisle he wanted to call aro and quit. but god, mike's an ass. does he know about the note? he definitely took pleasure in the messed up states of edward and jasper.

i had a horrible feeling in my stomach when carlisle and edward left jasper in his office alone. so who was in ben's office and what is up with eric missing? has he ever left the office? now i can't remember if jasper ever properly met eric. someone is in the offices after they lock down so it seems to me that someone is not leaving. hmmm...