Did your good use of grammar fall off the astronomy tower and die that last chapter? Oh, dear...

Dude! so loving your fanfic! I just love all the lesbain crap! (Im bi so watever!) plz continue it!

Nice!If you decide to continu the storie,it would be apretiate!

My only critique is... capitalization? and grammar? Where did they go?

Anyway, this is definitely getting fun.

Okay, Hermione falling off the bed three times in one night? Did someone actually spike the butterbeer with something a little stronger?

Hahaha, every night is real... really? Never woulda guessed.

Parvati and Lavender are evil.

Haha Ron. "What happened?" Wow, that's quite the reaction.

Wait, she and Cho kissed in front of the entire school? That takes guts.

Wow, that's a goofy pillow fight you've got going there. Then of course it has to go to truth or dare.

Hahaha, I will kill you, then hurt you, then never speak to you. Nice. I'm excited for the next installment.

er hello! write more please

please keep writng this. I absolutely (hey i spelled a big word :] ) hate it when u start a good one then dotn continue it.

update soon.

cool story they should have a threesome

PLEASE KEEP GOING!1 i love it ! ABSOLUTALLY LOVE IT!

Please update, cuz it's an extremely good story! With a great plot.

You really need to update mate! It's an excellent story... so PLEASE update

Nice chapter... so when is the next chapter coming up... please e-mail me and let me know!

Wow.. ok. I'm bi, so don't say I'm homophobic or that shit. But seriously. Spend more time on your fics. You don't much proper grammar in the last chapter. *shakes head and tries not to bitch you out* askgdlas. Ok. So. either get someone to beta your fics or just.. don't write them and save people the trouble.