i like it! i love it! i want some more of it!

please don't make him evil again!oh and it was really good update

It interesting,hope you can continue the next chapter!

-Ann-

hey, i liked it, it was good_ keep up the ggod work on other stories, too_

venusgirl

Very, very nice. Keep writing, you're quite good at this.

Awww...*thinks*Oh Malachite he is so hot...*sweat drops*Sorry I must have been day dreaming *shouts* Damb you Zoycite why did you have to steal my man!*artemis* Minako why can't you stop thinking about Malachite*me* shut up artemis we have a guest!*WHAP!*

Awwwwwwwwwwwww how cute! There should be a sequel! That's awesome! awwww! ::squeals:: that was great! Lonely Venusian

Okay, well, first of all, Mina's parents couldn't have known that she was Sailor V unless she told them. Just as Serena (Usagi) couldn't tell her family that she was Sailor Moon, it was the same for Mina while she was Sailor V. If you'll read the Sailor V manga (you can find it translated on-line) you'll see that Sailor V fought enemies much like the Negaverse (Dark Kingdom) and if her identity was revealed to her parents, it would put them in danger. Also, I doubt that her parents would take it so easily about her daughter bringing a man in who was her enemy. After all, didn't he try to kill her? Why would they be so accepting of that? As parents, wouldn't they be worried that Malachite could kill Mina easily? Not to mention that they would have at least *some* questions about how Mina became Sailor Venus. They wouldn't just take it so calmly.

Anyway, good story so far, you just need to fix a few things. Maybe you should check out the original version? The DiC version is *really* messed up! My opinion, anyway. I've seen both. (subtitled, of course _)

Well, I would be interested in seeing how to take this story... But make it a little more *believable* okay?

Ja!

write a sequil!

OO! V-babe and Malachite! I love that pairing and this is a great story! I hope there's more to come! Great job!

AQ