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| Reviews for Smooth Criminal |
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   Mrs. Monnock 7/1/12 . chapter 11Ending was perfect! Thanks for writing. |
| Shamatt0403 6/30/12 . chapter 11 they truly are a match made in heaven. |
| bellacullen202 6/29/12 . chapter 11 Thank you for finally having her kick him where the sun don't shine! This has made my day. It's an amazing chapter. Can't wait to see more of defiant bella. |
| Emily M. Whitlock 6/29/12 . chapter 11 Haha, loved the chapter (as always). Feels like I just get more and more questions every time you post something :) |
| Nerdlee 6/29/12 . chapter 11 I really like your Bella. Your Edward? Well, he really was in need of that knee. More than a little. Mia |
| ejjcullen 6/29/12 . chapter 11 love it! cant wait for more! |
| rocca110 6/7/12 . chapter 10 I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| staceleo 5/30/12 . chapter 10 This story is fantastic and what an amazing take on 'mating'. I am really interested in the dynamic in the FBI agent Bella and the sociopath Edward. I am eagerly awaiting your next update! Thank you! |
| bellacullen202 5/29/12 . chapter 10 Ooh! Go Bella! Still wish she'd knee him where the sun don't shine but oh well. Okay you don't have to give specifics but you worried me in your last reply, these two will fall in love at some point right? I mean they're Edward and Bella. They are always supposed to fall in love. But I trust you. Loved it when she told him she wasn't a virgin. And even if he's an obnoxious sociopath I still love Edward. Can't wait for his reaction to Jazz! |
| YellowFlowers1922 5/29/12 . chapter 10 I must say that I don't like Edward right now. Mass manipulation is wrong on so many levels. He is a hypocrite, double standards. |
| jadedghost22 5/24/12 . chapter 9 This is an interesting story! I hope that you finish with it soon, I really like it, and can't wait to see where you are going to go with this story. |
| VampireCat3 5/23/12 . chapter 9 EEEKKK! I love this story! Please update soon! |
| rocca110 5/20/12 . chapter 9 Looking forward to the next installment. I love this story. |
| bellacullen202 5/16/12 . chapter 8 Please tell me Bella gains control of the relationship. I also hope Edward falls in love with her soon. But before that Bella needs to kick him where the sun don't shine. He is an absolute jerk. Love the story! |
| habebti 5/16/12 . chapter 8 wow. i do not know whether to be impressed or horrified. edward is both disturbing and seductive. the forcefulness of his attack on her was alarming but hinted at desperation. i do not blame her for her feelings as he finished with her. it was disturbing. i look forward to the next chapter and her reaction to his actions. thank you |
