That was a lovely story! I really hope that you have not abandoned it. I really would love to see Albuses great next adventure as him living Harrys life and then being forced to live Voldys life and then after that is over forever damned to hell fighting Voldy eternally. As for Harry I want to see him marrying Luna and relocating somewhere. Sirius I want to see creating havoc for purebloods by doing away with bigoted laws!

This has to be one of the best harry potter story I've ever read. It's brilliant, and if you don't already know about it, I recommend "It's My Life" by Fyreheart. It really is so good and one of my favorites.

Now that was a joy to read. I also found it interesting how you incorporated all the crap Dumbldore did into it.

what happened to the part 2 of the epilogue

Brilliant, I hope you finish the epilogue

Other than a couple of typographical errors, a good start ("lunge" versus "lounge").

I do have to admit, I was a bit disappointed in Hermione's reaction. I had begun reading this from my list, thinking it was a HP/HG story. When I reached the line where HG begins talking about VK, I was beside myself. This is NOT your fault and was caused by my failure to read the description.

Good beginning.

Brilliant! But you wanted to write the second part of the epilogue, I am looking forward to it!

This was excellent. It was also one of the most unique stories I have read in fanfiction in quite a while. The use of contracts was both very smart and very funny(mostly with snape). Also, your use of foreshadowing for how Harry breaks out of the TriWizard Tournament was very well done. You rarely see foreshadowing of that quality outside of professional authors. Most fanfiction stories that try it either go way too subtle and its almost impossible to pick up even when you are re-reading, or so blatant that they might as well bold it with a comment in parenthesis that 'this is important and will come up again later'.

But you managed to work in the comment about magical guardians taking on existing contracts very well. It was part of another plot point, so you easily missed the ultimate importance of the point(or i did, at least), until it comes up again at the second task. So good job on that.

It would be nice to see the second part of the epilogue, but i guess its probably pretty unlikely, given that it has been almost a year and a half without being posted. Oh well. At least we got through the main story.

I loved this story when you published it, although I'm kinda anxious for the final epilogue. The story is 99% complete, so the suspense is killing me. It's been a year and a half, I'm starting to think something happened to you.

Nicely done.

Undoubtedly one of the better stories I have read in a while. I have read other stories where Dumbdork was the one sacrificed to bring back the Dork Lard but never one where an house elf was the Chosen One by the prophecy. I am a H/Hr shipper but like Luna too. There were maybe a few areas where the plot could have been fleshed out more (confrontations with moRON as one example) but overall a good story.

Oh for shame how could you not like a child abusing old bastard? Shame, shame, shame, on you. Not only did Dumbassadork put Harry with child abusers in canon he admitted he knew it. All seven books of canon are about child abuse in one form or another. Makes me wonder about JKR!

hell is good for that gay old fool since all gays and lesbians goes to hell no way god will want freaks who choose not to breed and live the life of whoring

it look like harry left that old fool dickless poor snape no more sex fun with that old fool anymore

good chapter