aww it ended

Great story, please continue!

this is very good

I think this fic is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO great! Go Gohan! Poor Panny... If she loses any more blood... But if she does... she was able to see her father one last time. AUGH! YOu made me cry... Oh gosh... Next chappie!

Wow, I like this story I hope you don't stop writing!

This is good. Not everyday that a DBZ fanfic has a good plot...agin...good job. I hope you keep it coming. Also, do you plan on having Goten return to the past after the fight with this boss? Sort of like a DBZ/DBZ crossover. Have this Goten meet up with the Z-senshi and Mirai Trunks during the Cell games...

Great story, don't stop writing this story is great. I want to know what's going to happen with Goten and Pan.

Hum. Dude is like Gokou, Chichi AND Piccolo? Tis future Gohan! *dances in goodness* *sees people watching her* *sweatdrops* Anyway, cool fic Val. I be waiting to see what happens. Red is a cool color. *nods* It is my favourite. Hmm. Gohan should have asked his name though... so Bchan could feel so omnipotent. That's a nice feeling, even though I doubt I could feel it just because I'm so... dead. x_x So... update! And I will give you a candy. *waves candy*

Ahh... very mysterious fic. Yes, yes. Please continue. ;).. /_\