poetic

Nice.

aw this was so sad :( but adorable at the end too! lolz, i like how draco just left afterwards, like it was drarry but it fit ur tone of the story...if that makes any sense? i just hate it how sometimes authors change their style suddenly at the end of a fic to put drarry into an already angsty fic, it just doesnt work properly but u didnt do that which was coolz lolz :)

Oh my... Beautifully sad.

I love Draco. So, I love Drarry. You should try to write more Draco/Harry because you did VERY good for your first one. Good luck!

-Lauren! :)

what are all these feelings choking and building up inside of meeee? I LOVE IT.

Continue it... I love it, but I think there is the potential for more... A real storyline, even more Drarry if wanted...

Cute!

Aww, I love the little note Draco left for him. So true...

This was wonderfully executed. I haven't seen a story that had a plot like this one yet, but it's been inside my brain. :) Beautiful.

Such a wonderful story. Sad , but wonderful.

you should make this a story not just a one shot.

well, great story. It fits the character and it's really emotional.

Good luck with the other stories ;-)

Woww! This was so good!
I really really enjoyed reading that, the stroy was amazing and your style is really good too!
And I know this sounds stupid, but its SO NICE to find a story that is good as well as proper spelling, it just really annoys me when people dont bother XD
Amazing stuff.
Keep writing :)
D/HForever

Sad but I like it

Aw really moving. You should do a follow up I think?