Wow what a start to a story. Never saw the ending of that chapter. Already the agnst?

that was really good :) update soon!

Don't like that they're fighting so much, but overall, I liked the chapter.

Oh no! Looks like trouble in paradise for these two.
Now I'm freaking out about what went wrong, but I'm guessing that's for later chapters.
Great chapter!

Huh? Why had they been fighting so often for the past three years? :( Can't wait to read more to find out.

"Oh boy", it seemed like the perfect love story,what's happening with all their fighting.

GREAT! can't wait for the next chapter!

They're fighting!

Loved the first chapter!

can't wait for more.

update soon

Ok, you've got my attention! Can't wait for more!

What are you, a machine or something? How many WIPs do you have going right now? Seriously. You must not be human. (Maybe you're actually a vampire - LOL!)

So... you painted this perfect little picture up until the very end - but didn't even hint at whatever this illness is that's gonna occur. You did, however, let us know that their life has definitely moved far away from that perfection...

You have this fic labeled as angst but not tragedy, so I'm guessing that you're not planning to kill off one of them, right?

And, because I'm already such a loyal follower of your fics, I won't fault you for choosing to use the world's WORST baby girl's name ever. Seriously. Stephenie Meyer should be shot for ever thinking up that f**kery!

-Q

Rut roh! Trouble in paradise! So far, so good! Can't wait for more! )

They loved each other so much - I hope they work out their problem. Great start to another great story!