Not bad

Kiki's last name is Rosita. I know cuz i am looking at it as im writing this review on DVD.

Goodness! My Dreamcast is finally letting me review

this! I really liked it... the idea of Michel/Kiki

is intriging and you've kind of showed us the way

it might be. Very good, bravo

Cute story. Pure wish fulfillment for the characters, and with the heck they went through in the show, who wouldn't want that?

I'm in Quebec, so here's some French corrections:

You love me is "Tu m'aime".

I am sure is "Je suis sur" with the circumflex over the "u". Michel is male, so no "e" at the end of "sur".

I love her is "Je l'aime".

And if Michel were feeling silly, he'd probably call her "ma p'tite chou-fleur" (my little cauliflower) or "p'tit chou" (little cabbage).

Yeah! Great fic. I'm glad there are more out there!Um, I think Kiki's mom proubably died a lot befor her daddy, but it all works in fiction! Um, Kiki's last name is Logita, all though sometimes people say Roseita (except they spell it right...)

Anyhow, please continue, I wanna know what's going on!

Pointless sap? I suppose that can be argued on opinion, but I wouldn't call this piece of work pointless sap at all! Romantic drivvle maybe, but then there's absolutely nothing wrong with that. A lot of authors have been making quite a bit of cash on romantic drivvle for the past 800 years around the physical world. If anything, you're tapping into something that keeps the publishing world spinning; you needn't be any good to do well with this type of work, but you do both well and are good ( a rare combination). Your immense library of published articles displays a love for a genre and an understanding of it that will indeed get you far (believe it or not, but that is just my opinion). Now, don't take all this praise as meaning I fell in love with the sketch; in truth it turned out quite the contrary. But that's only because I hate romantic drivvle; as far as I'm concerned it's both a waste of time and internet space (but that's just my opinion mind you). There's a lot of people out there who disagree with my opinions on that matter, and I'm sure they'd find this both time and space well spent. Keep up the good work, though more for your potential fans than myself.