Hey Rp Selena make more if u want ill herewith ideas

Really like the story line,creative and different from a lot of the other John Cena fan fic's on this site (: cant wait for chapter 4 (:

glad things are out in the open between lena and john.

a little advice, try separating everything instead of having it in a big paragraph like you see on most stories on here or you see in books. it will be a lot easier for your readers to read. but i know i'll still read the story either way

good chapter. i hope lena's dad doesn't find her, and if he does i hope john protects her. please update soon

i hope the cops got a red flag by the fathers reaction...im glad jhn heard her too. i hope he confronts her about it. good chapter...

i def think there is potential in this story its a good first cahpter, but it feels a little rushed...like them sharing a bed, and she doesnt seem as shaken up as i thought she might be. and being 18 i dont think he can file a missing child unless he says she was taken against her will. other wise i like it i hope next chapter will have more detail and slows down the attraction between the two..cant wait to read the next chapter

Great first chapter. Keep up the good work.

hi! i absolutely love ur story! please continue to update :)

interesting story so far. can't wait to see where it goes. please update soon

amazing
update soon

i loved it o this is going to be a good story