Very poetic, I really like it! Definitely one of the better Ophelia fics out there :D

Wow...so much anger in words...but it does show a good combination of Angst and Romance.

Nice job.

From, Comment person

P.S. Umm...any updates on the other stories? Or not?

she is hot in doth the emo look and the metal one and it is sad that she dies

Very interesting concept. I like it.

Actually a very good oneshot.
One thing: The Drowning Doom aren't really emo's, they represent Black Metal more.
Otherwise, good job.