   shirly queen 5/24/12 . chapter 27hello! I loved your story fascinating, oh itachi did not die, poor naruto ... I hope your upgrade bye |
| Amy 5/21/12 . chapter 27 Omg please update sooon so happy itachi isnt dead!.write us a nice juicy lemon after 27 chaps i think its well overdue teheh! Love your story! |
| yugiyamisex4eva 5/18/12 . chapter 16 oh man this is crazy poor naruto |
| violetkisses 5/17/12 . chapter 27 Ohmygoshhh, I am so excited to read more. This story is just getiing better and better. I love youuuu! Can't wait for the next chapter. |
| RainbowSprinkle 5/17/12 . chapter 27 Oh my god! Suspense... Im literally staring at my screen with my eyes falling out. That was one hell of a chapter . I absolutely cant wait for the next chapter , your a brilliant writer so keep up the good work! Xxx |
| LilyEverlasting 5/16/12 . chapter 1 T_T must...read...more...*cry* there were some minor spelling errors, but nothing big. You've caught me, lol. |
| chubby-king-chocobo 5/10/12 . chapter 1 First off, good job on the mpreg explaination. I was really skeptical about the reasons behind it when it was first mentioned, but after going through it a bit, it was more reasonable-note: I usually detest mpregs, but your writing and Naruto's characterization makes it worth while...for now. I have yet to read the rest of this to see how well it sustains. |
| redrobin 5/9/12 . chapter 27 Itachi's alive! He's ALIVE! Yes, yes, YES! I like your version of the kage summit than the author's, it has tsunade! Can't wait for more so update soon! And hopefully, Itachi won't die a 2nd time at least until he's old and gray! |
| SelfcreatedCharacter 5/9/12 . chapter 27 Oh my God. Itachi's back! Xd So cool! Naruto going to meet another member of the Uzumaki Clan! Nagato taught Itachi, didn't he? Such a suspenseful chapter! Do write more. |
| Rissa 5/8/12 . chapter 27 please update asap i love this story |
| SH4RiNG4N 5/8/12 . chapter 25 Not proper ItaNaru has been written yet, u say?
That's a damn relief because u totally had me scared there for a moment.
I can't wait for more then :-) |
| DHeiress88 5/7/12 . chapter 27 I almost choke myself to death when le evil cliffhanger appeared!
But then again your story is too awesome, I'll always read it even if there are evil cliffys in the way.
Hope you update soon!
PS. I love your works! |
| ani 5/7/12 . chapter 27 hmm... it's taken me two nights to read this and i gotta say it's worth it. you've got everyone IC even with the plot line changes. the explanation for Naruto's pregnancy was unexpected - since most mpregs don't have one - but makes sense. ItaNaru's not my usual pairing but i love how you're working it, how it starts. |
| Shining-Dreamer 5/7/12 . chapter 27 WHUT.
ITACHI IS ALIVE? D: |
| Dimensional Roamer 5/6/12 . chapter 27 Whoo! I knew it! I just knew it that itachi didn't die! Oh yea :D |
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