scold me if you must, but this was an awesome story! i just luved it! now 2 read the sequal... oh yeah, i already did! stupid me... o, it was good too!

lawl. good review.

seems the more you tell someone not to review on something they do ;D, what a clever ruse.

love your sporks on LJ

*snicker* VERY nice! Gonna hafta to go looking to see if you ever wrote the sequel. Have lotsa questions . . . but I'll wait to ask them. Thank you for sharing!

*sniff* THAT WAS SOO SWEET! That had to have been the best short story E-V-A! Loved it double time! 2thumbsUPUPUP!

FreeAngel

NO! YAMIS EVIL! T_T lol, i will still read the story, even if your hurting my darlings feelings. T_T wahh... o well, i love this stpry too much to not read it. update!

Very interesting story. Good use of cliff-hangers at the end of each chapter. I couldn't stop reading this story, even a second time. I also like Joey's humor. Now I'm off to go read the sequel just like everyone else. It doesn't suck :)

Awesome! I can't wait to read the sequil! :)

0_o Thank-you! Someone finall realized that actually, YAMIDARKNESS. Thank-you! This is gonna be awesome. I can tell! :)

Yay! Good Story!

Hope you wrote part two, I'm checking it now

So COOL! I love it when Yami kills things! DEFINATLY do a sequal!

i loved it though didn't get to finish it before my brother kicked me off the computer (shut up u idiot i'm busy) any way only two things yami evil isn't very origional because it happens in the manga and u cant have 15 of one card in your deck (three is the max for most cards two or one for others) and you need to give up two weeker monsters to summon dark magician...sorry :) i could preach the whole rule book any way your story was really good.

I LOVE IT! Write MORE! More I tell you! MORE! Puh-lease! OK, so admittedly I haven't checked to see if you've written a sequel, but even if you have I WANT MORE! please? *Puppy Dog Eyes*

WAY! COOL! Yami is an idiot of the millinia! Evil or not, he is still STOPID!
Read my fic, Love Jounou!

0_0 whoa, freaky... Nice job! _ please do continue!