|Reviews for The Boy On The Moon|
| Song of Grey Lemons 2/19/12 . chapter 1
Oh, wow! This is beautiful! It has the same voice as the book itself! It is like a deleted scene for the story. Good work!
| Silvara 8/30/10 . chapter 1
Is the story's plot already decided? I can't tell much based on this chapter, but I think there may be a little too much adjectives, descriptions, and the LP thoughts are a too many and too rational for my present comfort. I'll wait to read more to give more objective criticism.
| Shizuku Tsukishima749 6/3/10 . chapter 1
Not bad! Very cute! It would be adorable to have him meet the Aviator, eh? XD
| Surf-merGirl1963 5/12/10 . chapter 1
Very cool! It seems like a lost scene from the book or something. Thanks for writing a 'Little Prince' fanfiction and welcome to the category!