Oh, wow! This is beautiful! It has the same voice as the book itself! It is like a deleted scene for the story. Good work!

Is the story's plot already decided? I can't tell much based on this chapter, but I think there may be a little too much adjectives, descriptions, and the LP thoughts are a too many and too rational for my present comfort. I'll wait to read more to give more objective criticism.

Not bad! Very cute! It would be adorable to have him meet the Aviator, eh? XD

Very cool! It seems like a lost scene from the book or something. Thanks for writing a 'Little Prince' fanfiction and welcome to the category!