A little too short, I'd say. I liked the chapter, though. Still: keep it up!

Nice chapter! I believe it was shorter than the last, which isn't at all bad.

"Sorry it took me so long to upload this. I've busy with my messed up family. Life sucks. Doesn't it?"

Yes, life can suck at times. It's better than being dead, is it not? And my family is pretty damn messed up, too -_-

Again: Good chapter! Keep them coming, no?

Hey, I see potential. -

It's too hard to understand who's talking and who isn't though... You should proly make that more clear. There were a few gramical errors, too.

Good start! Keep 'er up! (that's what she said...)