oh my...im completely speechless...this was beautifully written. It's funny, im so used to watching and reading about violence in games, movies books etc.( it seems nowadays all characters must have a traumatizing past full of violence and ending in amnesia) that, at first dying twice didn't seem like that big of a deal, thinking in real life terms it's perfectly understandable why he would go insane from such treatment.

this is very nicely done, i pray for an encore!

Wow..

this is such a dramatic story.

I dont even know where to begin, to be honest.

I tried to catch myself up with everything happening in the stories relating to Jimmy's split personality problem.

I know that the whole point was to add this drama so that it made sense, but I think this may be a little too mature for the Jimmy Neutron category. The thought of the little kid who went around saving the day dieng 2 times and having a split personality as a result just seems.. odd..

Don't get me wrong, it's very interesting. I really like how you play the characers, so that you can tell who each personality is by the color in the eyes, it's really creative.

But I'm not sure I follow how exactly the events follow eachother. And Jimmy would have extensive psychiological damage, but I don't think he'd let something this drastic take complete control of him.

Either way, before you get the wrong idea with my review lol. This wasn't meant to be a bashing review, I was just sort of throwing that in there. I have mixed feelings about all of this.

You're a very talented author, and I love the suspense that your stories build. Update again soon.

Very detailed story well done!

Poor JIMMY!