That was so so good! It was really sad when falcon became blind but now that he can see everything has a happy ending. I love happy endings and this fic was really good, it was a very original plot which is hard to do and you worked it out very well. Putting together the two storys was good too. Continue to write, you have so many stories and there all good, so far, I haven't read all of them. Yet.

Jane

Ah...that was just a so cute ending. Are you going to write a sequel to this? Hope so.

ohh please write a sequal please

why is there so much damn slash?

WRITE A SEQUEL! WRITE A SEQUEL! That was brilliant. I love happy endings.

hey

I'm totally liking your fanfics

man, you wrote many. How in the hell do you do that? I've just started my first LotR fanfic and although i seem to make stuff pretty fast now, i know it will get more and more difficult in the end. so i was wondering if you maybe could review my ff tell me if I'm going the right way...

Thanks!

AAAHHHHHHHHH!

AJ!

LOVEDITLOVEDITLOVEDITLOVEDIT!

AM AWAY TO DRAW THAT LOT NOW!

REALLTREALLYREALLYREALLY GOOOOOOOOOD!

Bob:so...you saying you liked it then?

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

luv

Elendor

xxx

hmmm... that was pretty good, it had a good story line. i dont understand how a seeing stone san cause Falcon to regain his sight though. and how come half the time you cal legolas and falcon twins, and the other half you call falcon legolas's younger brother. and the way you say what the charecters are saying isn't the way that they would say it. you are using prety much the same way that we today talk, and they use something that is more like old english. other then that it was good. and i am sorry if this is hurtful in any way, i think you are a wonderful writer. this are just some things that i think could make the story better.

Horus

Quite sweet!

I loved the ending, though I agree with you to a point. It didn't suck but it could have been done a little better. But I don't hold it agents you, I mean you're writing like seven at once so um yeah. *_* Loved you're story AJ. Is there going to be any more?

you should have draawn out the ending a tad more, maybe another chapter or something. i can tell it's rushed, but you did already mention that in you author notes... no onme kill me, okay? but i think it would have been more able to create a good seuqel if you left falcon blind. but since you're NOT going to write a sequel, which i really think you SHOULD, it's fine... darn, I WNAT MORE.

The ending isn't so great. It's okay though.

That was not a bad ending-I liked it and I'm glad Falcon got his sight back.

*crying* Aragorn and Legolas didn't even kiss! Ai, anyways, I still liked, though it would've been better with some a/l slash... and I disagree with you, it was a good ending!

Your loyal reader (and fan!)

Property of Legolas

Ooooh! Very nice! I was wonderng when you'd finish this one! Good job! I'm glad Falcon can see again, I was sad for him! Yay for happy endings!