more?

I love this! I really hope that you update soon seeing that its been awhile. I've just discovered the LOTU series and I'm sad I didn't read the books sooner. Hope to see an update :)

it was such a good story and then you just stopped :/

Are you going to continue this ? I want to see what happens . Please !

PLEASE POST! You capture all the Lords so well, it's amazing, and your girl is awesome! You can't quit now, not after I'm addicted.

please please please continue this is he talking about helene and oh my god i realy want to know what happens next please please plaease please!

it just get better and better but i think i might know what Emmeline is!

strider and this mairi person, are they like an item or something. i think this is very good by the way the way you incorporated the characters and the description. and the way you used description to cause tension, now i liked that

oh my god this is so great i love the description and the background i thought it was very necessary and i am so curious about why the house shakes. is she some kind of immortal. thats it i reading the next chapter toe find out *squeal*

Please continue this story . I am totally hooked . And I don't mean fishing pole .

this is so good and unexpected thankyou cant wait for more

what is it? what is it? _, i hope your writers block goes away, what a cliffhanger, will eagerly wait for new chapter update _ can't wait!, your an amazing writer, hope you carry om writing

Hi, i'm writing this on my phone so please excuse any spelling mistake, i should be working but your chapter had me hooked on the first paragraph _, can't wait to read the next chapter! i'm feeling seriously lord deprived :0) and your book is the first that actually feels like i am reading gena's book, just wanted to let you know your doing a great job, the description is fantastic, and your first chapter is evenly paced and not rushed i especially liked the cliffhanger _, and the description of red jam as blood, i really hope you continue writing can't wait to read more of torins story are you a proffesional writer by the way?, if you aren't you should think about it_, hope you keep writing, stay well shari (_)

It's definetly good but Torin just seems very OOC. Ik it's hard considering his personality and demon but still, I think he could have been less OOC. But i still overall like the story

Oooh I'm liking this Update soon plz! I love Gena Showalters books I'm glad someones done a fanfic of it.

Cant wait to see what happens next.

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