"Next time we'll do it the normal way." She promised.

Love the line.

3 I shall now commence sighing with goo goo eyes at the laptop screen. Totally cute. XD

lol amazing! havent read anything quite like it!

Lovely. Magic is a wonderful thing.

Holy crap! What else is there to say. I was not expectin gthat. I have been wanting to read a Labyrinth fic thata went against the norm and here it is, well written and all. Well, it is a someone said in an earlier review, the chicke before the egg. It is definately an interesting plot twist. the question is who got so tired of waiting for Jareth and Sarah to get together. I honestly thought in the end, Jareth would know about her... I have to read your other Labyrinth fics now. Even if there is no explanation, this one is so fascinating that you must have some othe rbrilliant twists and turns to throw at your readers. Lord knows your Rurouni Kenshin fics are wonderful. Wow...

this review is long overdue.

your stories never fail to delight me... no matter how many times i've read them over.

hope you get the promotion!

ginny

Wow,something different!Write more JS. :)

I LOVE YOUR STORIES. RK & LABYRINTH ARE BOTH MY FAVES. I THINK KAORU AND SARAH ARE WAY TOO COOL. KEEP UPDATING YOUR STORIES.

*laughs*

i love this story! it's so perfectly written!

remind me to be careful next time a little kid approaches me in a restrant...lol.

Keep up the writing!

-Gryffyn

IN-teresting. Egg before the Chicken, eh. *laughs*

Interesting. Followed the path from a recomended fic on a site to an archive at Guily Pleasures to your work at through your profile to here. Since I like Labyrinth, and your writing was good, I thought I'd give it a go. Fun story, interesting take. I think I'll try some ofthe others as well.

-Cat

That's Hilarious! I love it!

I only recall the movie in bits & pieces.

I don't usually go for romance but this was a really good story.

Cheers,

Nicholas.

Ok wait i'm confused, his wife is Sarah right? This is a cool story, but im a bit confused. Whose daughter is Rialyn. Sarah's? Ok. Good story, but like i said, a bit confusing. And this is not a flame, just constructive questioning. Okee day? Like ur story. its cool

Lintrayel

aka

the writer with no talent

Ooo, that was neat. SO what did you promise yourself not to do? I think there needs to be a sequel, but that could just be me. Hehe, I agree with you those hair ties are impossible! What the heck are you supposed to do with them? Oh well...very nice :D Keep up the good work. And I have got to say your review of my story, "Yum" has to be my favorite "what the heck is wrong with you?" LOL, had me laughing ;) what can I say I wrote it to cheer someone up :D