Love the premise, looking forward to seeing where you take this story!

Nice done. Not bad at all. Grammars weren't disturbing factor.

update soon

Please update soon. )

Hi,

This is a really good idea, i like the storyline... but you may need to pay more attention to the tense you write in (Past, present and future). Other than that it is really good. Is English your second language? if so what is your first?

Keep Writing!

Please keep going! Its awesome so far and i need my Trauma fix. Wicked Job

I loved it let me know when the next chapter is out

omg i hope Rabbits ok! more please? :):

I love that you wrote a story for Trauma... there's so much possibility there! If you don't want the show to get canceled I would suggest you write to the NBC executives. I've done it a couple times, here are their emails:

nbc.
jeff.
jeff.
angela.
marc.
bonnie.

I hope you continue this story! It is the only Trauma I've gotten all week! I love the storyline!

omg more please! :):)