HAHA! GOSH! I REGRET EVERYTHING! I LOVED IT VERY MUCH! MORE MORE MORE!

There it is! I CAN FEEL HER NOW :D.

It's not boring anymore, brooke seems to be a cute little girl :D. But, sorry brooke; Gray is mine! Muhahahaha :P

I Loved it, liked it, and faved it.

Nice timing, i needed romance in my head ;)

Love always,
Katy-Joanne

Okay, it was good. But, no offense. For me, it was actually boring. I'm not good at english things 'cuz its my 3rd language. I loved the fact that this is an OC story; really I do loved OC, I just can't feel the romance. I just want to feel Brooke more. This is my review :D. But,it doesn't mean I'm going to stop reading . I'm still reading it, in fact; it's still romance ;) Maybe in the future chapters, I'm going to regret those things i said.
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Love always,
Katy-Joanne209

Awwwww...Thats sweet.
Lovely 4th of July tradition.

Whoo
Bonding and the first steps to recovery!

XDD Ahhhhhhh...An Illusionist/Lightning Mage? Neat!

Wow...poor Brooke...I cant imagine walking into my home to find that waiting for me.

lol, Mirajane is so smart! :D

this story is really awesome, please continue soon!

Awww...

Is Gray jealous?

Please update soon!

attack of the frozen food! :U

I think the same Gray, Brooke shouldn't be with Natsu cuz well...hes mine :D

Mirajane is so smart. i agree with herr :D

UPDATE

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happppybiiirrtthhhdayy :D

you know my answer.

just post both up ;)

WHOA surpriseeeee :O i like itt 3 but super short man D: write more and I will too (maybe lol) U write really well and dont think you dont, okay? O u O

brooke X gray 3

i dont like seeing brooke sad D: btw srry for not reviewing in a long time. Its really well written but try to add more of the setting.

XD I read xXMewMikageXx story, so i am expecting some drama then! Good job on this chapter also. It was quite good and well written :P