Wow, that was sad. Scuse me while I go get some tissue paper.

Seriously, though, your writing gets better all the time. You really should keep it up. No critisism from this gal.

Augh! You had to go and make an already tragic scene even more tragic, didn't you? Sure, there's one life saved, but... Will he find that life worth living? Good story, though.

OMG. I hate you! ( lol jk! good job, it was great to see Neil's feelings and not just Jane's... (hey, she got at least 30 seconds of feelings, so...lol ) Bwah, topped off perfectly to my SAD, DEPRESSED mood. lol _ yanno you're my muse, keep writing!

Well, you know *I* liked it. I love how you can always twist what's been given and make it completely different. I'm jealous of your imagination. :D