This story was amazing!

Loved the story! Really unique!

i cried, like a lot

Just wanted to say that this has become my favourite ATLA fanfiction, and that your story was absolutely magnificent. You should consider writing a novel and this story deserves at least 1000 reviews.

This chapter was soo sad :(((((

it was the most touching and beautifly heartbreaking scene I've ever read.

really really great ending! nice job i dare sa genius!

When I started this story I expected it to be light too :) But I think the chapter the Zuko died I have never cried so much while reading a fanfic (which should make you happy cuz you're a great writer!)

And then the ruby and time/world travel had me barely hanging on for a little bit, but I am so glad I trusted you because the ending was perfect :)

Very well done (Oh! and I loved the quotes at the beginning of every chapter, they fit well)

I realize that's its been a year since this story has come to fruition, but I just have to say something! This, in all my years of reading, has been one of the best stories I have ever indulged in. It took me through feelings I haven't experienced before, and I could feel every emotion the characters went through, a rare thing if my word is anything to go by. I really enjoyed this tale and thank you for your wonderful writing and for posting it here. Thank you! I really felt like that was the perfect ending.

I loved your story. This story would make and excellent book if you could create original characters and write a story replacing ATLA that you built on...You did a magnificent job and I can't stop thinking about how much I loved it! Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful job! Fantastic! :)

I love happy endings. :)

lovelots,

merylin

The beginning is a stormbenders rip off. So I kind of skipped it all.

It drags towards the middle. The pavati stuff is just so slow and not executed well and just confusing and IRRITATING.

I read from 17 to the end after skipping most of everything before it. Those chapters were good cause they all came together

But it was so creepy. Butterfly effect creepy. Ugh

This is a very creepiest story. I may have trouble sleeping tonight.

But I guess thats a compliment-bc its resonated within my brain.

Congratz ;) and good wishes

Oh... My God...

This story is really breathtaking. And so touching. I do believed that it was going to end like a tragidy. I am so glad it's not))

MY FAVORITE ZUTARA FANFIC EVER. your plot was so original, so full of depth and mystery, everything about it was just so.. intriguing. do you think parallel universes really do exist?

Wow...you really did an amazing job with this, very poignant and well-written. As a writer, you do a great job of addressing the desperate emotions of the characters and still somehow managed to bring about a happy ending with an intricate plot. Pavati reminds me of a book I once read, with a young psychic woman who sees a little girl in her visions as she seeks out missing children, only to realise it's her daughter and killing the Other Katara totally reminds me of Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban, not knowing what you're supposed to do until you're right there to do it.

Awesome job!

Now that this story is done I feel more at peace with it. I have a mixture of the same feelings I got at the end of Lord of the Rings and A Walk to Remember. Sad, but a life goes on kinda thing. I don't think I've ever cried this much about fiction. Thank you for this story... It as kinda awesome.