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as
2006-04-11 . chapter 1
So. I'm guessing that Enid Kelly is a relation to the famous Ned Kelly right? A subtle note eh?
Peace
2003-06-08 . chapter 3
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was fun to read. I hope there really is a Chocolate Frog card with baby Harry on it. I've seem them in stores.
Angelic Candy
2003-01-26 . chapter 3
WOWWWWWWWW! I loved this one too! It was SOOOOO interesting. So, I'm guessing Harry IS an Animagus??! I love the detail and humor you put into this one!!! It was sooooo great, you really have a talent for writing! *gasps* So that's what Professor Snape did?! How dirty of him to put it up on the BOARD! Hmm...so he actually valued Harry's famous Wizard Card, what a shock.

The thing that I liked most was the fact that when Professor McGonagall's late I thought that it wasn't really anything. And how you put suspense in after Harry follows Snape, thinking he's going to the owlry, when he's not. And then we don't find out what REALLY happened to Professor McGonagall till the end. Not even Dumbledore suspected a card collector theif...VERY intriguing.

That MALFOY! What was he trying to do to Harry anyway? I hate how he ACTS like he was trying to do something when he wasn't. Threatening to turn Harry back into a snake (when he knew he wasn't trying that) was very pathetic of him...but then again, that's how he is.

I LOVE how you portrayed the characters PERFECTLY they weren't out of character at all!!! Ron was humerous as always, Harry was getting into trouble accidentally and Hermione was the voice of reason. It was perfect!!! And Snape was too, cold, mean and taking points off of Gryffindor for no reason. And of course blaming Hermione for transfiguring Harry when he KNEW it was Draco. That's definitely Snape for you! *glares harshly at him*

WOW! You really shouldn't get Professor McGonagall mad, huh? It did seem a tiny bit OOC for her to chase the ferret around as a cat and practically strangle it (in front of students and the Headmaster, might I add), but it was amusing none-the-less and VERY helpful. After all Madam Turpin finally confessed. But...didn't she threaten to keep Harry as a snake as well...but yet she was sincere when saying that she didn't give him anything. *shrugs* That's a mystery I guess. And I love how Ron and Harry get the idea about the Potion, saying that Snape probably killed someone to give it to Harry, nice touch. I'm sure they'd believe that, after all, Snape doesn't hide the fact that he hates Harry. Which brings up another question: Why WAS Snape sent the Wizard Cards of Harry? And what is Harry going to do now that he can still transform into a snake?!? I love how Harry is just giving a card to Ron *grins* I love friendship! LOL! Love the ending...yes, Moody certainly has his way with people, doesn't he?? *grins* This was absolutely brilliant! I'll have to read The Butterflies sometime. I believe I started to read that last time but it didn't make much sense...probably because I was reading them out of order. ^-^'
luv,
Candy
Madelaine
2002-02-23 . chapter 3
Very Cool! I like it!
Saint Bacchus
2002-02-10 . chapter 3
This is a terrific series, lots of fun.
TexasRose
2002-02-09 . chapter 3
.T.h.a.t. .W.a.s. .A. .G.o.o.d. .S.t.o.r.y.~.i.!.i.!.i.!.i.
Lady FoxFire
2002-01-29 . chapter 3
I love you series.

Cute baby Harry. Looks like an angel in that lacy outfit. What was his parents thinking?? And why did Sirius let them do it to him??
Demeter1
2001-11-27 . chapter 3
Everyone was completely in character. I also loved the whole Harry/card/Snape thing. And once again, you proved that Snape's brave, if not completely soft-hearted. ^__^ Great job
Kcarke
2001-09-16 . chapter 3
WOW! This was a great story! I love how you get the feel of the books in your stories. I've read all your stories and they are all as if J.K.R. had written them.
Talia Carter (Forgot to log in)
2001-06-23 . chapter 3
This is just great--I love Snape!!!! Well, it's 2:00, I'm not tired, so I'm going to read the next story!
L.C1
2001-05-13 . chapter 1
'Lo. Just thought you should know that you have written the only thoroughly gen HP story(series, actually) that I've enjoyed, nay, devoured. Congratulations and more, please.
x
2001-05-12 . chapter 3
you really should continue this story
Kelzery
2001-05-12 . chapter 1
This really isn't about this story, but it's about the serpent of lord Voldemort. I was just wondering when you were going to have the next part out!!!! I would have rplied under it, but I already replied awile ago and it won't let me do it again. Please email me and tell me. my email is keltoo@yahoo.com Thanks!
knayram
2001-04-28 . chapter 3
Your story is great! I luv originality in a well-written fic.
erica richardson
2001-04-28 . chapter 3
write more i love your writing i am now going to read your o ther stories . I will also assume you have great taste in them too so i will read your favoprites
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