cute. :)

Awwwwwwww! That was SO sweet .

So CUTE ! Lol.

I'm sorry, you lost me at "half-hazardly". The word is "haphazardly", I'm afraid. A good beta reader would help you with these kinds of simple errors.

I understand you may be a writer who doesn't think word choice is important, and if so, then please feel free to disregard my advice. You should know, though, that there are readers who are put off enough that they will not continue reading. I am one.

Good luck to you and your writing - I see you're prolific, and I wish you the best.

Uuu ... that was just sooo sweeet ! .

It's short, but nice and sweet, because I've always imagined that Roy and Riza would have a son (and a stubborn one, of course ).

I liked the first chapters (because you described very beautiful Roy's feelings and because it was more serious), but the seccond one was ok too, because the end was ... I don't know ... maybe a little unexpected ? :)) (the part with "Water Alchemist" ).

Yup _ Nice story .

wow! seriously... wow!

I love this take on Roy and Riza's future :)

Artemis? I think you mean Amestris :D

This is cute. Father/son banter. I like it.

Okay; Winry: best thing in that fic. Which was overall a fantastic fic.

Nice!

Stubborn-Ass Alchemist, that would have been great.

Water alchemy, very different from dear daddy eh?

cute!

SO CUUUUTE! I was looking for a story like this! WAYTOGO!

I really liked this one. Your descriptions of Roy pacing around were absolutely brilliant. I also thought it was an interesting spin, how you chose to name the child 'Edward,' as opposed to a more common choice, like 'Maes.' It was very well written; thank you so much. Keep writing!

-kabiij.

Sweet!

I liked this part:

Havoc grinned, "Take it that a Mustang's gotta be one stubborn son of a-"

"What was that?"

Haha. I love Havoc's personality. and Mustang's reaction! Great story. :)

dear god i love it! i really hope its not a one-shot!