|Reviews for Promises|
| Yankee01754 5/17/10 . chapter 1
I can tell English is not your first language but I got the gist of the story and you've got the relationship between the characters down quite well.
Jake is a stubborn soul but so isn't JL. Watching them do battle is always fun! And poor Derek is always caught in the middle!
The banter (joking) was quite believeable.
Hope to see more. (And I"m glad I'm not the only one writing Jake and the Fatman fanfic now.)