You're quite the talented writer. I've read a few of your works and liked them all. This is an incredibly insightful look into Jonathon's mind. I always liked him and wondered how he justified what he was doing. I was also quite sad when he died. I hope you keep writing, you have such a talent for it!

Oh, this was good. I've always liked Jonathan, and I think this probably is the kind of thing he was thinking after that, based on later episodes. I don't know that they ever called Andrew 'Andy', but this line really caught me: "I’m the numbskull, Warren’s the sociopath, and Andy’s the kid we’re introducing to the wonderful world of rape and murder before his eighteenth birthday." Very good writing, as usual.

I agree, he was the redemeble one - that's probebly why he got Jossed on the show.
Good story

Wow, terrific piece. I could hear him talking in my head - excellent characterisation.

Jonathan was cool... I can't believe he got killed off! Anyway, great story!
Angel:)

Sounds defintly like Andrew.

Very good story. The interesting thing about season six is that the big bad wasn't this invincible, monsterous evil. It was just three guys that let things get to far. I think this fic does a great job of showing Jonathan's remorse and his feeling of being trapped in a bad situation.

*sniffle* I've always liked Jonathan and could never imagine what on earth possessed him to cast his lot with a creep like Warren. This is what his thinking should have been after Katrina's death...and he should have acted on it. He's been one of the most underutilized characters in the Buffyverse and he was poorly served in Season 6.

Well done. You have serious talent and should be writing original fiction as well.

::cries a little::

Oh, Jonathon...I will never believe he died a bad person. I could never see him that way, no matter what the events of Season 6 said.

THis was an amazing story I think this is how he did feel, I jus wish he had acted. Its so sad that hes now dead an can never redeam himself.

Very IC, good work!

That was soooooooo sad I can imagine those were his thoughts. After that ep. he didn't seem like a willing participant.

Poor Jonathan. Even now, a year later, I don't understand why he didn't break it off. He never belonged with Warren, being evil. He was just sweet; he should have had it better.

Go Jonny, go Jonny. hehe. Sorry. Grroovy story. I feel so bad for him now that he's dead. And before he was dead. I was outraged when they made him a villain last season. OUTRAGED. Jonny would NEVER have become a villain. I'm not in denial. I'm a nerd, and I have no violent tendencies. then again, no one's threatened any of my action figures yet...;-) Keep writing. TTYL.

Brilliant! Very emotional and accurate! Out of the Trio, Jonathan always struck me

as the less evil villain (I'm not sure he can even be classified as a 'villain'); Andrew

was the more childish-but-slowly-becoming-more-evil type (after Katrina's death it

was sort of like an addiction) and Warren was certainly more evil and brutal, and I'm

glad to see your representation of Joanthan as more of a human with real feelings; he

could never really hurt anybody. Who knows, if things were different he could have

ended up as both a Scoobie and one of Buffy's friends.

Great stuff! Keep up the good work!

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