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Wow I am loving this. I really hope you don't kill any one off I would love it if you updated soon, but I understand family and school problems just poses don't forget to update when you can. Hope everything will be ok with your family soon.

Excellent chapter. C: Well worth the wait.

Rawr at self-righteous people who know nothing, aka Delia. lol Brock and his hormones...

Also, since I know all about what's going on, all I have to say is...bat, and I hope your mom can come home soon.

wow. just.. wow.

that was intense, and really good. i got chills during the whole last bit. and poor trio! i hope you don't kill them off, i love 'em.

My prayers are with your mom/ family, and i totally understand about stressful school and dealing with house renovations. the fact that you didn't just give up on the story at all speaks volumes, and i thank you. :) better late than never, right? and it was worth the wait.

hna

Oh my. This is sooooo good! Great great chapter!

Whoa. . So many threats. And undependable Brock. x3 Another great chapter ; sorry for whatever family problems you have right now. D;

Archie is definitely cocky here. XD Just got poor Jessie in even more trouble, even if she went looking for it in the first place. Tsk tsk.

This is really good, and two chapters was definitely a treat! Update again soon!

Man, things are starting to get intense! And I like how you gave Gary and Brock some perspective, especially Brock. Nobody seems to give him much attention anymore. Update soon!

x3 Yay, I sense action ! Gary's not dead...and Brock's finally having a scene ! xD Hehe, I wonder if Ash's idea's really going to work out. n-n

Uh-oh. I do NOT like the sound of that last line. Is Giovanni planning on killing Meowth? Update soon!

This is so interesting!

Whoa. o-o Way to be the baddie, Giovanni. XD

Great chapter