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narutodragon 4/5/12 . chapter 13
tis sad that a funny story died
bill560682 2/28/12 . chapter 9
this year should be interesting if harry repeatedly oblitorated each of the ten seventh years then they will all be in st. mungo's for a very old time thereby leaving several open spots on thier school quittich teams. since it was ten boys and there are only about 5 boys per house per year then that means several were likely ravenclaws with a few hufflefuffs thrown in.
bill560682 2/27/12 . chapter 3
now if harry inherits the slytherin title from voldimort do to his killing him at age 1 or 11 or 12 then should he also not get any and all other titles of people voldimort has wiped out before him as well? i would think that voldimort would make sure he was the one to take out heads of families if by doing so you could claim thier title. an yes i know the title would pass down unless the whole family is wiped out but most have it done by right of conquest. so since harry beat voldimort he gets everything that belongs to voldimort but by that thinking that would also mean that all the deatheaters and everything they have also now belong to harry. voldimort was a lord and his deatheaters swore loyalty to him thereby making them his vasils and a lord has control over all his vasils. so in the end it would not matter who took out the head of the family or the rest of the line as a lord voldimort could and would claim those titles to himself, which means all those titles now belong to harry.
bill560682 2/26/12 . chapter 2
personally i do not think voldimort is the most powerful dark lord in the last 100 years. i mean the guy had 5 years or more an could not even take over one country an he started by owning all the most high ranking people in the goverment to start. i am sure he owned draco malfoy's grandfather then draco's father as well as countless yes that is how long they make it sound in cannon as if the war against voldimort went on for several years.
bill560682 2/26/12 . chapter 1
personally i think harry would be very smart even if he does not always show it. the way i see it harry would likely go to the library at school instead of the the play ground to get beaten up by his cousin so that is just over 3 hours a week in the library. also he would likely be sent out to play on weekends when at home so no one begins to talk which means he would likely spend about 15 hours a weekend at the local library. so that is about 18 hours a week harry spends in the library not counting summer vacation. so that is 900 hours a year in a library now if you figure he likely spends a few hours a week here and there at the library on summer break as well you may as well round it up to an even 1,000. so if he started going to the library at say age 6 then that is 6, 7, 8, 9, 10 or 5 years of 1,000 hours a year at a library. an once he starts hogwarts he and his friends spend countless hours looks for different things in the library such as flummels name in year one and what is petrifying the students in year two and tri-wizard tournament in year four. you figure that has to be at least 1,000 hours a year. an to find what they are looking for they need to go threw tons and tons of books on spells, potions, magic animals and who knows what else. an since they need to read every page in every book they will most likely find lots of spells and potions that sound like they would be great to learn and thereby harry would start making a list of them and later learning them. an if you think about it hogwarts library is not as big as you would think. if it has 40,000 books in it that is really only 1,000 different books and they have 40 copies of each book so that everyone who comes to do their homework can have their own copy and does not have to fight over them. now with transfiguration, charms, defence and potions that would account for about 300 books of that 1,000 so even if harry only took one book a week out to study on his own time that is still 40 books a year likely 10 on each subject. so by the end of fouth year harry has read 40 books on each of the 4 subjects or 160 of the 300 books on those subjects. as far as harry spending time with his freinds harry has very few since first year everyone would be fawning over the great harry potter so he would likely go to the library to get away from that or to his dorm. second year everyone thought he was the one attacking the school so he would hide in the library or his dorm and fouth year everyone thought he put his name in the goblet of fire and hated him for stealing cedric's glory so he would also hide in the library or his dorm, thereby giving him lots of time to study on his own. an why harry would study potions would be to get snape of his back as well as to have something to use on his so-called family during the summers. an the potions that are to hard for harry to make he can have the weasley twins or oliver wood make and claim they are going to be used to prank his family during the summers. this would not be hard since in potions you set one dose to be graded by snape and the rest is done way with, now we bottle it instead of dumping it. an i am sure harry learns about owl ordering things so he can also buy finished potions if it something hogwarts students do not brew. an remember harry during third year was able to do a spell most grownups can not even do so his should learn spells very well so that as a first year he should be learning second and even third year spells on his own no problem, second year he should be up to fouth and fifth year spells an by third year he should be up to sixth and seventh year spells. so by the time fourth year is over harry should have moved on to subjects like runes and arithmancy and be threw at least first if not second year in those subjects on his own as well. you also can not forget harry spent time living at the inn conected to diagon alley during the summer before third year so he could have checked out any of the books at the book store there as well. so he could have snuck in there under his invisability cloak and spent 8 to 10 hours a day reading to his hearts content. if harry happens to be a speed reader so he can read a book in 30 minutes then that is 2 books an hours and 20 books a day which is 140 books a week and 520 books in one month. an even thou a book store may look as thou it has 40,000 books it is more like they have 1,000 books with 40 copies of each one, an if you leave out wizarding fiction books written for lonely housewives you can likely cut that number in half. an yes i know cannon harry was not allowed to be too smart otherwise granger would not have anything to do. also it would write ron out of the story do to him not being able to get harry to just slack off all the time.
Dyani91 1/22/12 . chapter 13
i would love toknow where you were going with this fic so i could take it up i have fallen in love with it

it is a wonderful storyline and needs to be used
smargden 11/26/11 . chapter 11
Fun story this far,

But Dumbledore - is Dumbledore (100 years old and high up in law) he keeps things close It's NOT for him to give Ron Weasley this INFO:

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Dumbledore sat forwards and surveyed him, "I need to get Harry under my control, so that he may fulfil his destiny. I need you to help me with that. If you do, you will get a large quantity of money from Harry's vaults. For us to accomplish that, I need you to become Harry's friend, and find out his weaknesses."

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If anybody get this out of Ron - Dumbledore is not free.

No - he can promis to give Ron - anything - but to say anything like 'it comes from Harry's vaults' - that is NOT 'Dumbleore-person'.

He may think it - yes - but NOT give Ron that info.

/Smargden
1sunfun 11/10/11 . chapter 12
A relly good, nice, interesting, exciting and original story.

CCAP
Trinity Fenton-Phantom 9/29/11 . chapter 13
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
bobcox26 9/13/11 . chapter 13
I sorry you deciede to stop I was really enjoying the storyand it was a lot better then some that I have readed here. thanks if you ever go back to it please keep me in formed
10th Squad 3rd Seat 9/4/11 . chapter 13
Nuuuuuuuuuuu!DX

Come back here!
10th Squad 3rd Seat 9/4/11 . chapter 12
One more face...Nice chapter!11 years olds thinking of getting to last base?DX

Ewww!

Nice Founders spat.
10th Squad 3rd Seat 9/4/11 . chapter 11
DAMNIT RONALD AND DUMBLEFUCK!I hate them both...GO Minerva!XD
10th Squad 3rd Seat 9/4/11 . chapter 10
I see some foreshadowing!Go Harry!Dumbles and Snape have been put in their place!XD
10th Squad 3rd Seat 9/4/11 . chapter 9
Ron,Draco,and is so smart!And I feel very great about Herimone's thoughts.

:D
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