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Reviews for: While he Dreams
WatsonandMary4ever 4/9/12 . chapter 1
A great story. Very well written.
bishwop 1/12/03 . chapter 1
This is beautifully sad. You've managed to capture the way Frodo feels for Sam very well in such a short fic.
Flame Tigress 3/18/02 . chapter 1
So sad... *sniff* Beautifully written.
Nimroth Whitebough 3/9/02 . chapter 1
oh this is so sweet! even though it is short it is very good! hooray you! Nim.
Haunting Shinigami 2/28/02 . chapter 1
Yay! It's good I like ...cute!
Strenua 2/27/02 . chapter 1
this is a great story and you should continue it! Sam comes after him of course :) something anyway. You are a great writer I see and I will read some of your other stuff in a moment, if you have any other *hoping*

Namaste!
Van Donovan 2/27/02 . chapter 1
Please break my heart and write a sequel to this depicting Sam waking up and realizing Frodo has indeed left for good: his walking stick is gone, his pipe, his sack, plenty of food beside, along with a fair amount of missing wardrobe and his heavy cloak.

I want to see Sam's desolatation, his pain at being abandoned without so much as a goodbye or explaination. Yes. That would be quite lovely.

Although I did like this. It was very nice. It seems to be begging for more though. I went to click the "chapter 2" button and . . . alas there was none.
Joyful 2/26/02 . chapter 1
*wipes away tears* *Sniffles* So sweet & so sad! ! ! ! Awwwwwwe!
Melilot 2/25/02 . chapter 1
That was so sad and the quote was perfect. I have read it a few times a every time i cry because it makes me think of what i would feel it i had to leave my best friend. That is so good. Will you write anymore LOTR fanfic?
Jewel of the Twilight 2/23/02 . chapter 1
Oh. That is so sweet.
YouKnowWhoIAm 2/11/02 . chapter 1
Not bad at all. Do you do longer ones or is this just the first chapter of more to come? I would be interested to see more. Nice name by the way.
sarah 2/11/02 . chapter 1
Hey! Love this fic! (tear!) :)
minaminamina 2/11/02 . chapter 1
Aw! It's very good, except unless you want to insinuate a *relationship* between Frodo and Sam, you should probably change the "i want to lay my head on his chest" thing. ALthough, maybe you should keep it in there. I DON'T KNOW! Good fic, keep writing!
Mainecoon 2/10/02 . chapter 1
Awwwww! So sad! I liked it.
Whitney G 2/9/02 . chapter 1
Aww, *sniff sniff* See you review my fic, i review yours :) Loved it! was sad and sweet all the way!
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