Yeah, that's it. Whether Peter would come in the way of Caine's "love for everyone" job. I hope they find the correct answer to that someday. I think their connection comes first, and without it there wouldn't be any "love for everyone", at least not something Caine could actually feel and be part of. He'd just emulate the Shaolin ideals, nothing more. It's so painful that Peter doesn't know it yet, but I guess they need to figure it out on their own.

Aww! I love it.

I love the way this is written its just soo realistic and well wonderfully written! Heart wrenching! I loved every second of reading this! Great writing! I miss the series, I keep seeing that yellow pages commercial with David Caridine, and I just get really sad. *sighs* Again great writing!

I really enjoyed this. It was simple and sweet and I didn't get bored! I'd love to read another one.

hey,

i really enjoyed this story. i love the small metaphors you use as well as the general flow. Your descriptions are top.

The only thing i desired was slightly more action, and not in the typical KF-TLC sense... just more movement. Also, i was hoping for more chapters. I like this enw life started and i'd like to read more about it.

please keep on writing! you obviously have a talent and a voice for it. Good work.

Nicely written, wonderful Peter characterisation, good Caine, too- a lovely little scene that you should enjoy if you enjoy the fandom.

That was really good I liked it.

I just love the way you describe Peter's feelings!

Is there more to this story? If so I'd love to read!

Ivy

I love this story, I hope to read more from you, there really aren't that many fics out (that I can find..but I'm new to the fufic world) and this is one of the best. Keep it up

Not that I needed to get teary eyed this early in the morning (er..early afternoon? alright 10:30) but still.. very good.. *smirks* I like it! wtg!

*claps*

Sweet and endearing.