I didn't mind that it was all dialogue, actually. It wasn't all that long, so it was enjoyable. :)

I love how you keep people in character! And have cute moments & conversations that would almost certainly be moments that they didn't show us on tv. :P

Anything you write is pretty much gold on here (if you haven't noticed what your reviews all say :P). Just fyi.

:)

It doesn't matter that it was just dialogue. In fact, I loved it. It was great how you still incorporated their witty personalities without having to explain every little thing that they did. The dialogue was awesome and funny. I loved the hidden sexual talk. It was adorable and hilarious. I'd like to read more of this if you wrote some more. It was light and nice with a hint or more of longing. I really liked it. :D

This was amazingly cute.

I love your Jonas stories.

I truly hope you write more.

This made me happy and I adore your writing.

YOU. MY DARLING KATIESPICE. ARE AMAZING.

I AWHED AT THIS. THIS IS WHY WE'RE RPING JOELLA ASAP.

SO YUMMY.

I'M TALKING IN CAPS FOR NO REASON. ANYWAY.

YEAH YOU'RE COOL.

BYE.

-elainabear

I'll be honest, I don't think you're a fantastic writer. I'm not going to shower you with compliments. But you're good, you're blatant, classy, to-the-point (oh wait, those seem to all be compliments)... Your writing is funny, your style is cute. That being said, it's just kind of cute, you know? I'd like to see something more emotional from you. You seem to have it within you. Then again, this critique could be quite biased on the fact that I'm a huge angst!addict. Anyway, it's not bad, it's not the best thing I've ever read, but I look forward to reading more from you.

This was adorable and funny! you did a really good job! I know what you mean about rewriting it as you typed it, i do that too!

SOOOOOO CUTE.

omg! i love joella! they are soo adorable! and i love this oneshot! its sooo cute! i love that its all just a conversation, its all just dialogue. :)

The only Joe/Stella stories I find myself reading on yours. And though there isn't many of them. The amazingness (yes, amazingness) of them make up for limited amount of stories.

So anyway. Like I said, or was trying to imply, your writing is brilliant. Seriously, it is so good.

I love the partial fluff, comedic outlook this story had. I always see Joe and Stella as something light, carefree, beautiful. And you seem to make them more than that -something really extraordinary.

I loved it, so much.

-a.

This was adorable 3 I've come to LOVE Joe/Stella now partly because of your fantastic writing (: Write more! Haha, this was nice. I can really imagine the conversation going on.