your mixing rika's name up with reily's

Nicely done. VERY original. Very believable. you are going on my favorite authors list. Please check out my stories. Are the new Tamers (Jason, Lee, etc.) based on people you know?

At least you explain your reason for misspelling Rika's name on purpose, considering that Reika w/the "e" is Riley's original Japanese name.

I see what you mean by all around. How many of these guys are there? This doesn't really fit with any part of the show, though, and digivolving is too easy for them.