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| Reviews for Second Time Around |
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   CloveLudwig99 4/5/13 . chapter 1This is great! You should really write more! :D |
| LiveLifeForeverLoved 5/22/12 . chapter 1 O. Mi. gosh. KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING!KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOINGKEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! KEEP FRIGGIN GOING! |
| Me 5/17/12 . chapter 1 This is really cute! You should actually make it a story and say what happens as they go through with everything |
| amy-odair 5/21/11 . chapter 1 I love this , you've captured the essence of the film and all the character so well, i should know, i've only seen the film 67 times if you count the time i will watch it again this afternoon! Haha, super excellent, really. I see you've put this is complete but would you ever consider continuing it and writing a chaptered story of how this pans out. I'd really, really, REALLY, love that! :D 3 xx |
| tonu1234 8/21/10 . chapter 1 The first time I came across a story with this theme, I was stoked. It's a great concept; statistically, it happens all the time. However, this story comes up way short for me. There's not a lot of original thought in this. The unholy pink plus sign, the sunny D, etc. It's all basically the first film all over again. Also, I don't see how on earth they would decide a mere year later to keep another baby. I also don't buy that they had sex unprotected - I'd be more likely to assume that they tried protection and didn't work it right (happens a lot with condoms, people can be forgetful with the pill). It also strikes me as freakin bizarre that they don't even seem to know know whether they used a condom or not. What's up with that? |
| sowhat730 6/6/10 . chapter 1 great job with keeping the characters in character! this was a nice one-time shot, i normally don't like these too awfully well but I liked yours! |
| Jesseloverleona 5/6/10 . chapter 1 I like it ;) Can't wait for the next chapter :P xx Leona |
