This was a sweet story and everything seemed to be going well for all characters too - I liked the twists, like Cloud recovering his memory or him being related to Shinra.

This is an amazing story! I feel bad for Vincent... but I like the plot and how this is turning out. Keep it up! D

please add more such a good story!

hey there. that was good! I wants to read more! give me more or give me death! please don't let me die!

This is a good fic so far but you definitely need to proof-read and work on spelling and grammar. Otherwise, great job and keep writing!

Hey. Ca u send me the lemon? PLEASE? I don' care if you say it sucks. im askin nicely (For now)pleasepleasepleaseplease?

put the lemon up, please ;;;

Great story, something else then all the other stories of Sephiroth raping Cloud... O_o;;;

MORE!

Happy! I didn't realize ths had been updated for the logest time! .;;;;;;;;;;;; Anywho, YAY! SEPHY BACK! *does a little jig* MORE MORE! FLUUUUUUUUUUUFF! *does a little happy fluff dance* Fluff good! Fluff good! .

Yah! Sephy's back! *dances around* Can't wait for more! Have Tifa get all mad that Seph's back, please?

Write More! Is very good!

Sephy! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY! You got Sephy back! I love you! Continue please!

WOW! Sephy is back with Cloud! Yahhh! I'm soo happy! Please write more, and with a lemon tooo!

Lauren

fluffy _ a round of happiness for everyone, I'd say. it's cute, and you need to write more! ::grins:: I wanna know what happens with Vincent.

Aerith-cahn bakc! WOO-HOO! I love you! And please write more!

Lauren